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Copyright: Jean Christophe Jacques (jonathanhart) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1615 W: 243 N: 1276] (11569)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-08-04
Categories: Architecture
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/320 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Travelogue: denmark trek
Theme(s): >my graphic &/or abstract photos [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-10-30 7:47
Viewed: 456
Points: 46
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
hoooo, it's not really a great photo... maybe interesting to see but is it your cup of tea ?

i upload this to make a contrast with my previous post... i said modern buildings are not built to outwear and can be horrible... but of course it's not the most horrible building I have seen, it was funny to see all these same blue windows

PP: vertical lines correction with shiftN

in WS
a building near this one, less photogenic...

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  • tb808 Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 0 N: 0] (870)
  • [2007-10-30 8:38]

Great minimalism. These windows perfect fit in the photo. Lamp below is good too.

Bonsoir JC :)
Après l'ancien, le moderne :) C'est vrai qu'il existe des horreurs dans le monde urbain, mais j'avoue que ce petit immeuble me plait bien. Beau graphisme et jolie couleur ! Rarement vu des immeubles aux fenêtre bleues .... vraiment une bonne idée de l'avoir capturé !
Bises
Marylou

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  • efi Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 210 W: 13 N: 165] (3067)
  • [2007-10-30 10:26]

hi jonathan;
nice capture of windows(54) :) ..modern architecture sample..tfs..

salut JO
de tres belle couleurs pour cet imeublemoderne, image changant vraiment des habitudes
bien vu, amitiès
edith

Bonjour Jonathan,
Belle photo d'architecture et correction des lignes verticales, Excellent point de vue et nettetée, beau building..moderne..bien vue.amicalement.
Michel

beauty visual of geometric forms
nice color and lines


tfs sERGIO

Hi Jonathan,

good idea, interesting motive. Very nice work. TFS. Steve

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  • glint Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 598 W: 2 N: 447] (2872)
  • [2007-10-31 7:20]

Hello Jonathan,
I like the minimalism here. I ike the blue and especially like the way the perfe ct symmetry is broken by the lamp at the bottom. Jusst my cup of tea.
Bev

I enjoy that kind! This is my cup of tea as i did many reflection shots. I even did something similar. With less windows but mine was with reflections of cumulus :)
In your case i believe your intention was a uniformity... A did a workshop for that.
By the way i realize my explanation were too basic, i will edit a couple of details :)
You did well the graphical spirit on that crop!

Awesome capture - it looks surreal..nicely seen. I really like the lamp at the bottom.. it grounds the picture and is unexpected.

Hello Jonathan,

I adored the repetition of these windows in this building.
Great shot and good creativity!
I like the blue of the windows in this concrete.
Excellent visual!
Congratulations

Sérgio

Love the image here. For a while i thought it would have looked better with the lampost cloned out but now i quite like lampost just sticks out give your image a bit of character. Nice image and well spotted

Hello Jonathan! Wow! Fantastic minimalism! Simply great shot. Wonderful lightness, wonderfull colors. Great effect. Have a nice weekend!

Like an abstract painting this one,well done Jonathan.
jan

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3158 W: 240 N: 7054] (28473)
  • [2007-11-03 12:40]

Hi Jo, good shot. I like seeing the odd reflection in the lower windows. It would look even better on a day that had many small white clouds too.
Well seen
Janice

Bonjour Jonathan.
C'est simple, mais beau.
Lumière, cadrage et répétitions sont splendides.
Bravo !

Hi Jonathan

I do quite like this sort of thing. I am very much a nature lover as you can tell from my photos but I do appreciate line and form. I can admire the uniform nature of buildings. This is very well seen and makes an interesting post. Nice work

TFS

Karan

Hello Jo :)

I love this kind of compositions:)
Simple, but an effect is just brilliant here!!!
Excellent sharpness, nice, subtle colors...
Congratulations,
Izabela

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  • Danert Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 505 W: 10 N: 757] (3708)
  • [2007-11-04 20:00]

Bonsoir Jonathan,
Quelle symétrie et une image parfaite pour nous le montrer . Beau résultat avec le travail de correction de la perspective .
Daniel

Hi Jonathan,

very good geometric shot, impressive multiplied squares view. Simple but effective

Well done!

Gio

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 310 W: 73 N: 462] (3910)
  • [2007-11-15 16:45]

Great eye Jonathan,very vibrant,just love the positioning of that lampost,really gives the viewer a feel for scale.TFS.

Ron

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  • limba3 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1099 W: 428 N: 401] (11437)
  • [2007-12-01 16:20]

Hi
Excellent idea of this shot.
Congratulations.
TFS
Anna

very interesting. simple but so effective .)

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  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1089 W: 58 N: 184] (25121)
  • [2008-02-03 15:04]

J'adore cette approche photographique, c'est simple, c'est agréable, mes hommages à quelqu'un qui a un talent certain.

Iso.

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