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Its Your Future


Its Your Future
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Copyright: Michael Dolby (mrmike1935) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 27 W: 0 N: 22] (1450)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-04-16
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC-FZ7, DC Vario-Elmarit 1:2.8-3.3/6-72 ASPH, Digital
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-04-16 7:44
Viewed: 224
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
One of Roskildes Schools has a visit by a Travelling
Green Information Service.
Teaching them how to save Energy.
They can then go home and pester there Parents.
It Works.
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  • tojav Gold Star Critiquer [C: 80 W: 0 N: 0] (538)
  • [2008-04-16 8:02]
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Hi Michael,
Nicely introduced commonplaceness. Good composition and light.
Wiesiek

It's a decent shot but seems a bit distant and cold/clinical to me, considering the message.
I feel like a passive, disinterested observer, maybe that's what you wanted, I don't know, and that's fine but felt off to me. ;0)
I took a shot at bringing a bit of a warmer more active feel to it in the Workshop.
TFS,
Wilt

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