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The girl in the window


The girl in the window
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Copyright: Claudia Fernandes (claudiaf) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 51 W: 0 N: 0] (1759)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-06
Categories: Decisive Moment
Camera: Canon PowerShot G5
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-07-01 13:09
Viewed: 756
Points: 8
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Hello claudia, a wonderful clean composition, with lovely vivid colours and great detail, I really enjoy the curves of the window.
Did you add the girl afterward?

Nice work, well done!
::M::

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  • n0xdw Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 84 W: 7 N: 39] (437)
  • [2005-08-18 0:10]

I really like this photo, but i wish there was a little less space on the left placing the girl closer to the left edge of the photo. I like how she is looking out the window, makes you wonder what she sees and what she is thinking of. TFS

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  • jafsc Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 504 W: 53 N: 88] (4621)
  • [2005-11-13 6:13]

Me gusta el toque de modernismo que le daa la joven en jeans en un contexto de puritanismo y tradicion. Para mi es una magnifica fotografia Claudia..
José

This is not a simple photo.White inside and a dark jeans suite in contrast with the outside .
All this is perfect in balance. Good work
Ruud

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