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silverdimma


silverdimma
Photo Information
Copyright: Kari Karppanen (daswerk) (105)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-07-10
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-07-13 3:31
Viewed: 384
Points: 1
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Woman on the desolated beach. Katja in the never ending midsummer night. The title in swedish stands for silver haze in english.
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The idea is interesting but I see some faults here: you shouldn't have cut her piece of head when she's presented on this pose. Her eyes are making us pay attention at the upper part of this pic so the piece of head you cut is missing. And you could crop the photo in a different way - to leave some extra space above her head and below her legs so that we coul see that she's sitting on the bench and the pic was rectangular.

You have to know that I write this comment not to distress you. I just think that this picture is good for me but could be excellent:))

Take care,
Anna

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