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J e n n i II


J e n n i  II
Photo Information
Copyright: Dennis Bavenmark (denka) Silver Note Writer [C: 2 W: 0 N: 35] (850)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-02-28
Categories: Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 20D, Tamron 28-75mm F/2.8, CompactFlash
Exposure: f/9.0, 1/125 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-04-25 21:36
Viewed: 681
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Studio light and reflector, model Jenni my classmate. Smoothed the skin a little bit, added a little hue saturation on the eye.
Crit and comments welcome
1/125, f/9
ISO 100

denka
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Hi Dennis, very good portrait of this model.. very good lighting and contrast.. good detail as well

tfs

Alaettin

Good shot, nice colors, nice angle, very sharp.
I really liked the way you have handled this shot.

Hi Dennis
Nice portrait of your model, excellent crop and light.Regards. Rafael

hey dennis!
good post-processing and a great pov! the girl is wonderful and has great facial features and an expression!

-Bartek

Good composition, a powerful portrait - the light effect is fantastic.
I'm a fan personally of unretouched photos, but you've done an excellent job of this and kept the textures relevant to the subject and mood. Well done!

  • Great 
  • torr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 50 N: 80] (1735)
  • [2006-04-26 0:20]

this is my fav thing
portret and extreem lightgame.
Verry nice done.
Congrat.
Kurt!
!

Hi Denis, exclent job. You shot litlle more then half of portret and it is much better then olny half. good work.
MAjran

beautiful portrait, dennis.
the lighting, positioning of the subject to frame, colors and details are superb. tfs.
jeff

Good job, it's a nice half-portrait, I like the lighting and softones of her skin.
Martine

  • Great 
  • jontew (14)
  • [2006-05-09 10:17]

Very good modell and light! But I would have tried cropping even closer. Heightwise somewhere halfway between her chin and the bottom of the image. And then from the right also to compensate for the proposions. I actually did the crop, but I've already made two workshops today...

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