-Framework part II-

Critiques [Translate]

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• jako_vdw (0)
• [2006-05-02 11:32]

Hi Dennis,
Stunning minimalism. When I saw this was part two, I just had to see what part one was like. I have to say I prefer this one. The details of the leaf are brilliant, and I think the more of it you include the better.
Well done,
Jako

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• starbug (177)
• [2006-05-02 11:43]

excellent shot, there's a similar effect I've seen today- the details are of course great, but what i like most about it is that with such great composition and in b&w tonation the photo looks very artistic. i love it.
regards

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• Soundsangels (11481)
• [2006-05-02 11:57]

Very beautiful and particular.....
The thin lines of the frame fit very well with the subjet...
Good composition
Great work
Claude

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• c3101 (1246)
• [2006-05-02 12:30]

Very nicely done Dennis.
Nice shape, lovely outline.
F32 ?~ You obviously wanted everything to be sharp, but in fact, by using such a small aperture you are making the image "soft" because of the extreme diffraction caused by the small lens opening.
Your depth of field is very shallow anyways, as your subject is on a softbox, lying flat, you have about 10mm to worry about.
Rather try a "modest" aperture like f6.7/f8.0, and see the difference in clarity.
Read more about this at: http://www.cambridgeincolour.com/tutorials/diffraction-photography.htm

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• maratony (1445)
• [2006-05-02 14:37]

Very great shot B/W Dennis!
Congratulation.

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• cloverstar (0)
• [2006-05-04 10:35]

I have been admiring your framework shots. I like this one the best. Very good details and white background.