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Rock-Paper-Scissor-Shoot


Rock-Paper-Scissor-Shoot
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Copyright: Dennis Bavenmark (denka) Silver Note Writer [C: 2 W: 0 N: 35] (850)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-11-01
Categories: Experimental
Camera: Canon EOS 300 D, Canon 18-55 mm f/3.5-5.6 USM, CompactFlash
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Miscellaneous II, MKultra [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-11-01 12:02
Viewed: 674
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi everyone!
This was taken today in the studio at my school. Itīs one assignment we got today and it has to be ready tomorrow. So I really need your comments & critique on this one.
The assignement was to make a simple and clean poster with 4 pictures. So I got this idea and added the "gun" to the old hand game: rock, paper, scissors.
I only gave the hands some vivid colours to give it a simple and cool impact to the picture.
Hope you like it.

denka

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Hi Dennis,
I like your creativity here, very well done. TFS
Fred

Hi Dennis, very creative, nicely done. However, if you want to be logical, the fourth one should be called gun.

Well done.

Marleen

  • Great 
  • mugush Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 477 W: 48 N: 164] (1728)
  • [2005-11-01 12:15]

very nice one,, different and abstract kind of..
but what is similarity between these pictures? i can figure out one thing that is hand,,
i hope you will get good marks on it..
best of luck
love
mugush

Hello Dennis,

Great idea and well presented. I like the different colors on the hands, but I find the "paper" hand is normal color... Interesting. I agree with Marleen. "Gun" would fit better with the format. Hope you do well.
Kevin

  • Great 
  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1286 W: 153 N: 729] (8681)
  • [2005-11-01 12:23]

Simply Great!
Congratulations!
Luci

This a great poster for the hand game "Rock, Paper, Scissors.... Shoot," also a nice play on the words!

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  • seanf Gold Star Critiquer [C: 134 W: 9 N: 176] (1436)
  • [2005-11-01 14:09]

hi dennis
very creative, and a nice twist at the end. i agree with marleen and kevin, logically the last image should be called 'gun'.
sean

Hi Dennis,
Nice collage, very creative and well made.
I agree with other members about title of the last pic : Gun suits better than Shoot.
Another comment : the hand in the "Paper" pic is really too small in comparaison with the other hands ; I can understand that you resized your shot in the aim to conserve the whole leaf (but maybe it will be easy to obtain the same size of hand by using a smaller paper leaf for the shot)...
Take care,
Martine

Good work, Dennis, I'm sure it'll be very well suited for school. Great idea to use the game! Well executed with the big white space.
Kind regards,
Annelies

I like it just the way it is. The different colours with the hands is creative. Nice layout. Maybe change the word 'shoot' with 'gun' to keep in the the context of the words. I hope you do well with this shot at school.

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