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Marked for Life


Marked for Life
Photo Information
Copyright: Dennis Bavenmark (denka) Silver Note Writer [C: 2 W: 0 N: 35] (850)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-12-13
Categories: Friends/Family, Experimental, Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 20D, Tamron 28-75mm F/2.8, CompactFlash
Exposure: f/22, 1/125 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Artistic male nudes [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-12-17 16:29
Viewed: 540
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Good evening everyone. This is from my series with my friend Jesse. I took it in the schools studio. It´s my first time taking pictures of live models in a studio, so any critique on how I have managed is much appreciated. I took a couple of shots, so here is the second one. I experimented with the light to create different shadows and a imapct to the whole image. I like the shadows and light on his back in this one so hope you like it to.
1/125 f/13
ISO 200
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  • mugush Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 477 W: 48 N: 164] (1728)
  • [2005-12-17 16:37]

nice work Dennis, it doent seems that it is your first time, it is kind of professional work.. well composed,nice pov. clear and sharp thats what photographer wants to achive,,
thanks for sharing
Love
Mugush

J'aime beaucoup l'idée de cette photo. J'aurais voulu voir le tatouage plus clairement mais l'ensemble de la photo est superbe, avec le bras placé droit qui souligne l'angle du dos.
Nina

nice done, good tones. Interesting crop
TFS
Fred

I like these experiments with body. Keep working.. I like the title you give and unusual composition for body.
Nice one...
Elif

Great title (really), good lights, nice tones, nice transitions. If this is one of the first few shots you have taken in this genre, than you have already achieved a thousand times more than I have (honest).

The only thing I would have changed or reconsidered is the composition: get rid of the white triangle between the arm and the body and make the body (the subject) more compact, more landscape-like. Promising work.

Great composition and POV, Dennis. I like the way you cropped it. Nice farming ... and I like those hairs between the shoulders. Great job, Nino

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