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Dock at Sunset


Dock at Sunset
Photo Information
Copyright: Meg Thruston (fauxfinn) (23)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-08-23
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/11, 1/250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Kids from the World Part VIII [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-10-25 0:05
Viewed: 597
Points: 15
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  • KrL Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 520 W: 123 N: 488] (7363)
  • [2007-10-25 0:21]
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Bonjour Meg,
Un joli moment partagé.
Douce luminosité, les enfants au bout du dock offrent une perspective interessante.
Dommage que tu n'es pas laissé un peu plus de champ sur la droite, pour que l'on ait l'ombre en entier.
Une petite note serait un plus :o)
Bienvenue sur TL !

Karèle

What a cute moment. Good composition with all the elements placed nicely within your frame. I particularly like the falling sunlight on the children and pier. The sky is a little bit disappointing as it lacks substance compared to the rest of the scene. The colours need to be enhanced. May be some creative post processing work using photoshop could help.
Kind regards, Kath

Hello Meg,

Welcome to TL.

Nice shot,fantastic capture of a lovely scenery :)

TFS
Atri

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3546 W: 737 N: 2382] (18950)
  • [2007-10-25 1:50]

Welcome to TL !

Wonderful moment captured.

v

great composition, a decisive moment indeed for these
two child...good warm colors.
welcome to TL, i just hope you have put a small note about this shot.
tfsmavic

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  • Konie Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 348 W: 29 N: 298] (3006)
  • [2007-10-27 23:59]

Very nice composition Meg. I particularly like its simplicity and use of geometry. TFS.

Konie

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  • karith Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1065 W: 80 N: 1168] (7393)
  • [2007-10-30 10:05]

Welcome to TL!

This scene is charming, with a warm and fresh feel to it. The children look so absorbed in what they are doing, and seem to be very much in sync with each other at the moment. Although the sky is a little pale, I like the sense of sunlight it lends to the image. This is a great 'feel-good' shot:)

A charming picture Meg. Maybe a little soft or maybe it's just the sun's glow, either way, I like it.

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  • Eeros Silver Star Critiquer [C: 10 W: 0 N: 1] (205)
  • [2008-02-15 5:20]

Onpas tosi kaunis kuva!

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