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Self Portrait


Self Portrait
Photo Information
Copyright: Joni Jarvinen (jorbe) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 28 W: 0 N: 1] (291)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-11-20
Categories: HPP [Heavily Post-Processed], Portrait
Camera: Canon 20D, Canon 17-85 f/4-5.6 IS USM
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/60 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-11-20 11:22
Viewed: 594
Points: 15
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
My first self portrait...
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Great self portrait, I like your choice of lighting here

Hello Joni
For a first try, it's a very good try! Just a pity - at least to me - that there is that harsh reflection in your eye (flash?), which takes away part of the overall serenity of this portrait.
Just my opinion, of course. Feel free to (dis)agree ;o).
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

mooi omgezet in z-w en prachtig belicht een beauty gr magda

Hi Joni
Fantastic portrait, beautifuly lit and superb in B+W
Regards Pez

  • Great 
  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1438 W: 22 N: 0] (11554)
  • [2007-11-21 0:51]

Hi
Beautiful portrait...
Great expression...
One BIG :-) tomorrow...

Hello Joni

Nice meet you.
Beautiful presentation, you are very beautiful boy.
I liked his self-portrait.
Good choice and light.
Congratulations mi friend...

Sérgio

very good self portrait, nice tones and expression. maybe you can crop from the left side, because the black area is a bit dominating

Hello Joni

nice self portrait, light is great for this low key portrait, and focus is good

TFS

Olivier

Nicely done Joni for only your 5th loading. Good light, fine detail and well composed. I don't know a fix for the flash reflection but I think it works anyway. TFS,
David

Many thanks for your comment on ‘My favourite shot’

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