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Roof Etchings


Roof Etchings
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Copyright: Andre Salvador (erdna) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 630 W: 68 N: 747] (5425)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2003-06
Categories: Artwork, Experimental
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 5700
Exposure: f/5.5, 1/391 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): MY PAINTINGS & PHOTOGRAPHIC-FINE ARTS FUSION [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-04-05 11:17
Viewed: 1204
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Now it looks like works of art in two versions. One in pewter metal and the other in plated bronze metal. The images are of the roof lines in Helsinki, Finland. I find the steep roofs with their different material interesting. So I took pictures of it. Then I decided to modify the visual presentation of the photograph by working on it on Photoshop. I like the results but I want your honest opinion on it. Does it please the eye? Is the change an enhancement of the photo? Did it change the character of the photo? I have many more questions but only your honest opinion can help. For your comparison, the original photo is in the Work Shop (WS).


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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5757 W: 198 N: 2577] (10106)
  • [2005-07-08 22:01]

André, they are two different works
Both different ones, enriched to his way
To mine to see, the work of the metal pewter shows me
a drawing, practically a sketch. Here already
he got a different work, The one of the taken a bath bronze
she gives me aspect aged, old, they put chick.
Two works, two different visions, both with one
quite constructive meaning in the art.

Sérgio

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