<< Previous Next >>

End of the day


End of the day
Photo Information
Copyright: Mary Alba (Alba) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 537 W: 0 N: 206] (2760)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-08-21
Categories: Nature, Decisive Moment, Mood
Camera: Canon Digital IXUS V
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-09-16 8:27
Viewed: 536
Points: 13
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A tree is a tree is a tree...
Add Critique [Critiquing Guidelines] 
Only registered TrekLens members may write critiques.
Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To katya534: Hi Katya,Alba 1 09-19 17:06
To rewshearer: Hi Rew,Alba 1 09-17 09:32
To denizler: Hi again,Alba 1 09-17 09:28
To hay_kes: Merhaba Hayati,Alba 1 09-16 12:38
To foureur: Bonsoir Jojo,Alba 1 09-16 12:37
To miau: Bonsoir Michel,Alba 1 09-16 12:36
To GreenBaron: Hi Hans,Alba 1 09-16 08:54
To fumaretue: Hi Fumare,Alba 1 09-16 08:52
You must be logged in to start a discussion.

Critiques [Translate]

yes just a tree... I made a ws

Hi Mary,
Yep 'a tree is a tree' but you have captured this one very well! Although the sky is a bit boring and 'empty'(excuse me it's only my opinion).Overall well done and TFS!
Hans

  • Great 
  • miau Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 499 W: 0 N: 59] (3602)
  • [2006-09-16 9:26]
  • [+]

Bonjour Mary.
J'aime beaucoup l'intensité des verts de ta photo.
Bien cadré et le point de vue est excellent!
Bravo!
Michel.

Hello Mary
Splendide composition d'arbre seul sur la petite colline. Bon cadrage
bravo pour cette belle image
jojo

Salut Mary,
Great tree picture.Perfect...
Very well done.
Best regards.

hAyati

Hi Mary
I have to say Fumare's workshop is an improvement on this, mostly because of the composition. In my opinion the shot is too 'balanced' between land and sky, and that makes it quite boring. Stronger composition makes a more dramatic and exciting shot.
The other issue is the overexposed sky - but I don't have any answers for you, because I am still trying to learn how to avoid that problem!
Thanks for sharing :)
Rew

Salut Mary,
Very good Photo,beautiful composition and colours.Have a nice day.
Regards,
Deniz.

I think this tree would look even better if it were shot with a blue sky in the background. I would try to shoot the scene under different angles towards the sun and see which one would give you a bluer sky.

Katya

Calibration Check
















0123456789ABCDEF