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What is the author in the world that will teach you the beauty as well as a view of woman ?
[William Shakespeare] |
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For a portrait taken with camera-mounted flash, this is very nice. Crisp, clear, and a beautiful model.
Rew
- juyona
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(15439) - [2009-02-04 11:23]
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Hola Jean,
deliciosa mirada, composición y encuadre...
me agrada este retrato. realmente es un ángel.
saludos
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- trekks
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(13621) - [2009-02-04 11:49]
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Pretty model and a good expressive look into the camera. Very good skin tone and a pleasant portrait despite the flash being used; no glare! I find the focus to have loss some sharpness in the shallow DOF, but the eyes are sharp in focus. Good portrait shot.
tfs, bill
Bonjour jean-Paul
Tres joli et doux portrait aux nuances "chair" tres bien rendues.Un joli sorire tout juste esquissé qui n'aurait presque rien à envier à celui de Mona Lisa
Good shot.
Pose, colours, sharpness and composition are all great.
Light is a bit hard. I think it would be more pleasing if the light was softer. If you used a flash gun you could bounce it off a wall or other white surface to diffuse the light and soften it.
That would also help you avoid the shadow from the nose to some extent.
Cheers,
Jens
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