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It's still raining...


It's still raining...
Photo Information
Copyright: cherubin veletzas (cherubin) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 29 W: 0 N: 5] (145)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-02-21
Categories: Decisive Moment
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-02-25 12:59
Viewed: 631
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
same day with my previous post...

-desaturated
-added sepia tones
-increased saturation
-added noise

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  • Tintin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2198 W: 267 N: 345] (1982)
  • [2006-02-25 13:00]

I really like the composition of this picture with the nice diagonal liine created by the railing and the 2 people with the umbrella. I like your sepia but I am not certain about the grain - but it could be just a personal preference. Well done!

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  • eleana Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 216 W: 110 N: 94] (3480)
  • [2006-02-25 15:18]

Hello Cherubin! I like your idea with silhouettes a lot. Nice compo, good colours. But I absolutely agree with Suzanne that grain is not so good idea, and without this effect your beautiful photo would looking better, IMHO :-)
Best wishes,
Elena

Good diagonal composition. I like the way to two people are walking in the rain with the umbrella. The sepia choice is good, but perhaps not the grain. I think because it is a silhouette, it would look good if remained sharp around the edges. I think the grain has softened that area too much. You could always keep the grain for the background which would be nice, but maybe erase the grain from the people. Only my idea, you may love it the way it is.

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