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she left me


she left me
Photo Information
Copyright: HUERTAS Raphael (raphsax) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 42 W: 1 N: 0] (320)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-11-23
Categories: Decisive Moment
Camera: Olympus E 300
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-11-23 7:04
Viewed: 260
Points: 11
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  • niraj Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 183 W: 3 N: 96] (2042)
  • [2008-11-23 7:07]
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very poetic Huertas, It appears that while you bent to leave the rose on her path, she moved on. Thanks for sharing this idea. Bye

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  • LilDii (39)
  • [2008-11-23 7:16]
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idea - 10+++++++++++++++++++

Hola,Huertas,impresionante composicion gran idea y perfecta presentacion,felicidades.Julio

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1349 W: 0 N: 1643] (13394)
  • [2008-11-23 11:36]
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very subtle way of visual emotions,good work in style.
jan

I like the idea very much and a good presentation, however, the title would be much more believable and stronger if you were to put the rose much lower in the frame and have the footsteps showing only after the rose instead of in fron and behind, just a thought!


Dean.

Aubry-gado Raph!

Je vois que la rose t'inspire, même si celle-ci à jeté un froid jusque Reims... De l'amer "I" de ParIs, à l'arène du poitou en passant par le boudin de Lille (de l'âne, Ohé!!) la rose est malmenée, ça ne m'étonne donc pas que tu en vis une gésir sur la neige ardennaise. L'émotion m'étreint...

:) Jess

Interesting and poetic composition, the dark red color works perfectly in contrast with the withe snow enclosed in the black frame. Good art work.

Best regards Raphael.

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