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• pemi71 (2617)
• [2007-04-30 8:03]

Hello Jessy ,
Good shot and nice Portriat & nice looking women.
It looks interesting and there are attachment between woman and nature..
..It's simple, clear and beautiful.
tfs

Petar

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• gnada (21679)
• [2007-04-30 8:38]

Helo Jessy...
Good shot, beautiful colors and composition. Lovely model.
Well dan, George

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• bult (1037)
• [2007-04-30 8:51]

Nice model, nice pose, nice background. But I think the cropping is weird: too much space above / too little space below / maybe a combination of both.

Marcel

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• Roly (553)
• [2007-04-30 9:14]

Pretty model and nice, natural pose. I agree with Marcel, the crop isn't very fortunate, I would take more from top and right. The harsh, direct sunlight is an interesting choice for a portrait. Well exposed, nevertheless.

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• johnnymag (2357)
• [2007-04-30 12:05]
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Hi Jessy,

Great work, but I think also that you have too much space around the model. I've done a WS, showing where I would crop. I've also applied some gaussian blur and cloned out some of the fly away hair. I love the colours you have in this shot and what a beautiful model!.
Best regards,
John

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• Aloys5268 (2756)
• [2007-04-30 14:56]

Jessy
Beautiful girl and picture.'
I think the workshop is oke. (better)
Well done.
Aloys

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• christiangrosch (1040)
• [2007-05-07 18:44]

Wooooooowww!!
Very beautiful!!!
Lovely model, nice look!
Good colors!

TFS,
Chris