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spring is coming... first clues...


spring is coming... first clues...
Photo Information
Copyright: Jean Christophe Jacques (jonathanhart) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1771 W: 295 N: 1496] (15791)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-02-10
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/160 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): .Field-o-graphy / Graphismes Champêtres, >my green stars, field, >my "fields" photos [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-02-17 3:40
Viewed: 1069
Favorites: 4 [view]
Points: 52
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
adifferent version is on TE
in each WS a B&W version
in your critique, tell me your preference !
on TE the majority like colour version...
and what about treklensers ?

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Hello Jonathan.
This is fantastic landscape. Great composition with many lines and nice colours.
TFS
Wojciech
p.s I like colour version more

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  • Rob Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 194 W: 5 N: 14] (1466)
  • [2008-02-17 4:09]

Hi Jonathan, great layered look with nice colours. Well done. :)

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  • Jong Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 428 W: 0 N: 273] (3168)
  • [2008-02-17 4:16]

wow what a multiple layer landscape, the green really look nice. excellent colours, Jonathan

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  • Ivan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 403 W: 112 N: 270] (3854)
  • [2008-02-17 5:57]
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Bonjour Jonathan,
Sans aucun doute la version couleur. Et j'aurais même saturé un peu plus ces couleurs.
Ce panorama fait du bien à voir ce matin, je rentre à l'instant de mon activité de pelletage de neige quotidien, 3 mètres de haut sur mon terrain ! Merci de partager cet espoir de printemps.
Ivan

Hi Jonathan
Its hard for me to decide. Both have their own beauty. But if I have to decide, I might pick the color version.
Lovely shot of the beautiful landscape. I liked the layering effect, creating a nice pattern.
Well done and TFS, Jon.
Rgds,
Ramdan

Bonjour Jonathan,
Jolie perpective de ce paysage de printemps, belle prise de vue et couleurs , pour nous au Québec ce sera seulement au mois de mai pour la verdure:)
Bonne journée
Michel

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  • limba3 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1081 W: 436 N: 421] (13302)
  • [2008-02-17 8:47]

Hi Jonathan
Absolutely beautiful capture!!!
Excellent lighting and colours. Nicely composed and seen.

hello Jonathan,
very nice visual with fantastic natural
texture and colors..ya spring is coming

greetings sERGIO

Hi Jonathan,

This is a beautiful shot. I love this version in lieu of the black and white. The reason is that there are so many subtle shades of blues, greens, etc.... I love the patterns and repetitions throughout this photo.

tfs, Lisa

Bonsoir Jonathan
La version est différente mis elle toute aussi belle.Bravo pour les mêmes raisons.Bonne soirée.
Amicalement
Gildas

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  • pdp Gold Star Critiquer [C: 110 W: 39 N: 123] (538)
  • [2008-02-18 14:13]

Hi Jonathan, nicely seen. The fields and patterns are very nice. It certainly looks like spring is approaching. I feel that it could do with an adjustment in levels to boost the contrast. I wondered if the composition could be simplified so I have done a workshop. I hope you like it and I hope you don't mind. Nice shot.

Hello Jo
splendide ton paysage rural
on dirait une peinture
j'aime les tons fondus de vert et marron
beau travail et bien vu
amitiés

jojo

Hi Jo, wonderful landscape with splendid graphic effect, very well done, ciao Silvio

It's fantastic! I truly love this photo.
The soft tone gives nice early Spring feel...
Nice composition & colours.
I put this in my favourite list ;-)
Yukiko

Hi Jonathan,

Stunning shot! A great composition with a lot of lines and colours, excellent view. I prefer the colour version. TFS

Best regards,
Sorina

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  • hester Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1320 W: 31 N: 1634] (9994)
  • [2008-02-19 10:02]

Hi Jonathan

I prefer this version best. It is a lovely scene, I love the lines of colours. Paul's workshop is lovely too.

TFS

Karan

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1407 W: 275 N: 1946] (11992)
  • [2008-02-19 11:50]

Hello jonathan.
Great view, great landscape presented. Very original layers made by nature.
Always perfect.
My compliments.
Janek Kloss

Hi Jonathan,
The banding of colors is very effective here ... I like the pastel colors ...it is like a painting actually. I like both version because each medium offers different qualities. Color is obviously very pleasant visually which majority will like but B&W will highlights details better. Well captured and composed. Excellent work! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

Hi jonathan.
Wow, super i love the line and the colors, great work
Regards Frans

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  • lion Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 598 W: 66 N: 31] (5814)
  • [2008-02-21 5:17]

Wow, this view is so interesting and wonderful. Very nice huses of green with mist behined

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1368 W: 0 N: 1670] (13545)
  • [2008-02-21 8:19]

looks like the land of Paris-Roubaix(The hell of the north).........
Superbe!
jan

Hello Jonathan.

Excellent picture, nice composition and colors.

Regards.
Jose Luis.

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  • degani Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 176 W: 0 N: 262] (2624)
  • [2008-02-23 23:18]

Bonjour Jonathan
beautiful "game" of lines and colors in this great image, really very well done, bravo
best regards
franco

What an amazing photo,Jonathan!
You asked about the B&W...Without no doubt, this photo is a color photo; the colors make all the difference here.Anyways, the B&W version is not a good conversion, in my opinion.
I very much prefer this one, no question about that...
Trekearth,...,treklens;yes, I have this problem,too.
I came to treklens because here there is more liberty for creation,for experimentation.
Trekearth is more like a "postcards" website, no offense.
On the other hand,trekearth has much more audience than treklens and this is an indication of what most people want.
For the moment I can`t choose between two of them because they are so different...
Thank you,
Nelu

Absolutly love it. Great fade fron solid tone, to pastel..strong composition. Good work.

J'adore, merveilleux jeux de lumiere et couleurs.
Cette photo a une qualité de peinture. Impressionnante composition.

Salut,

pas vraiment de préférence entre les deux photos couleurs, elles sont chouettes toutes les deux. Ces lignes naturelles sont très douces, agrémentées de jolies couleurs.
Tu aurais pu essayé de recadrer l'image sans mettre les cailloux en premiers plan, ni l'arrière plan pour rendre la photo plus abstraite.

en tout cas, joli boulot :)

Edit: j'allais poster un WS pour illustrer mes propos, mais je vois que quelqu'un a déjà proposé quelque chose en ce sens :)


Jean-Marc

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  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1119 W: 62 N: 167] (27905)
  • [2008-03-11 7:59]

I love this one Jonathan. Personnellement je préfère cette version. Cette photographie me fait espérer qu'un jour l'hiver sera chose du passé par chez moi.

Iso.

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