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Copyright: Jean Christophe Jacques (jonathanhart) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1770 W: 296 N: 1496] (15763)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-11-11
Categories: Nature, Abstract
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): >my "fields" photos, >my graphic &/or abstract photos, .Field-o-graphy / Graphismes Champêtres, >my favs [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-11-18 8:31
Viewed: 384
Points: 46
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
the original framing of this one is horizontal, but I had the idea to make the patterns even more geometric with two equal triangles and the almost parallel lines
I also tried something not easy : adding a frame which is not white or black, grabbing the colors in the photography
other PP used is adding brightness and contrast, and maker the black tones a little bit darker... resizing for TL and sharpen, then fade the sharpen as textures become quickly strange because of the numerous tiny details of the fields

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Simple, graphique, efficace! Heureusement qu'il y a ces lignes diagonales dans le vert du bas, sinon, il aurait manqué quelque chose. Bien vu! Le sharpen a juste un peu trop accentué les taches blanches à mon goût, sinon j'aime beaucoup.

Hi Jean Christophe,

wonderful POV. Great details (texture is wonderful) and good colours. Title matches the image perfectly.

Have a nice evening,

Stasa

Witaj Jean,
Nicely made. Used nature. Good colours. Inventive frame box. It is attractive me.
Pozdrawiam - Roma

Merhaba Jean,harika bir kadraj,harika bir kompozisyon.Geometrik renk dizilişi ve oluşturulan kontrast nefis,ellerine sağlık :)

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  • Adri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 518 W: 23 N: 1843] (11068)
  • [2008-11-18 10:03]

Hi Jean,
This is the work of an artist, so wonderful!
So you see, if you look very well you can discover real art in a landscape.
Very well done!

TFS and greetings from Netherlands,
Adri

Hi Jean
a wonderful display of simple geometric colored shapes. a very artistic approach. great composition. good sharpness and contrast.
compliments.
tsilla

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  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1119 W: 62 N: 167] (27859)
  • [2008-11-18 10:50]

Tout un impact celle-ci ! Bravo pour ce design fort recherché. Disons le bien fort " c'est spécial ".

Iso.

Bonsoir Jean Christophe,
Très bon resultat de ton experiment. Des belles couleurs et textures. Interessante profondité et très belle geométrie.
Amitiés
Raimundo

im not sure about the frame; i usually prefer black or white as they not interfere with the colors inside the photo
i like very much your pictures with the multicolored lines and especially the ones with multicolored land like here...

Hi Jean,
this is just an amazing compo indeed,
excellently cropped and presented with very neat frame,
you did very well to make the patterns even more geometric with two equal triangles and the almost parallel lines, which makes your shot more incredible,
i really love the symmetry and perfect harmony of lovely colours here,
welldone and tfs,
warm regards,
Taner

the beautiful plot of ardenne French with unmistakable signs Jonathanhart

cheers sERGIO

salut JO
un petit passage sur le site et je tiens a te féliciter pour ce panaché de couleurs.
bien vu, belle luminosité.
amitiès sincères
EDITH

HI Jo,

I like this very modern, abstract work of art. I have never noticed the beauty of fields prior to your photos. They are outstanding.

Nice frame and sharpening in post processing. It gives it a different look. I had to look twice at it as I knew it was a field of some kind.

bien a vous, Lisa

ciao Jean (was not Jonathan?)..
so nice this crop.. colours and lines create a wonderful cromatic effect!
excellent! thanks
ciao Marco

Salut JC

C'est une observation bien originale, j'aime bien ces rangées parallèles.
Les couleurs se marient bien et le cadre vert ne surcharge pas , c'est bien pensé.

Je ne sais pas pourquoi mais cela me fait penser aux chocolats Jeff de Brugges....LOL

En tout cas c'est une jolie photo.
Amitiés
Daisy

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1198 W: 0 N: 2344] (19400)
  • [2008-11-19 0:29]

Hello,

Superbe graphise verticla, quelle iamge ces bandes de terre différentes avec sur le bande noir ces point blanc une im age de toute beauté, grandiose.

Bravo et amitié

Nicou

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  • lele Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 816 W: 51 N: 1717] (11169)
  • [2008-11-19 1:38]

ciao jean...grande composizione geometrica..ottimo pov..bellissimi colori..un grafismo eccezzionale...complimenti
lele

Salut JC,

Excellent: graphique, couleur, cadrage, bien réalisé : Respect

un autre JC

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  • ablok Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 188 W: 87 N: 5] (225)
  • [2008-11-21 9:19]

Hello jo' !
Paraitement composé celle-ci!
Les lignes sont a leur place et finissent pour 2 d'entre elles dans les coins,c'est plutot bien calculé.
Je vois que tu t'éclates dans les champs, a quand le champ de mars ou le chant du coq?!

Au plaisir!

ablok.

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  • Iwon Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 205 W: 0 N: 77] (6978)
  • [2008-11-23 1:49]

Hi Jean,
Beautiful artistic picture!
Wonderful lines, colors and composition.
Well done.

Iwona

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  • Kli Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 190 W: 17 N: 198] (1978)
  • [2008-11-28 10:02]

Bonjour Jean-Christophe,
Les couleurs sont vraiment exceptionnelles et j'adore le graphisme de ces lignes !Bien cadré, Bravo.
Amicalement.

Pascalie.

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  • mbasil Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 251 W: 150 N: 409] (2860)
  • [2008-11-29 22:30]

I like this shot. Great concept. Really brought out by the colors and lines. Looking at others in this series, this is definitely my favorite. I think the tight crop really brings out the shapes.
Mike

Bonjour, Jean
You produce so beautiful carpets that I would buy them all to decorate my house ;-)You have an eye to find the beauty in nature and capture it, well done!

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