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Red lighthouse


Red lighthouse
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Copyright: corinne Cocky (coquelicot79) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 565 W: 218 N: 1915] (8126)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-01-08
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Architecture, Decisive Moment, Nocturnal
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC-FZ7
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-02-26 12:40
Viewed: 293
Points: 3
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Red lighthouse
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Would be interesting to know what PP work you've done on this picture - there seems to be a halo around the lighthouse which seems to suggest sharpening work, and yet the focus does seem rather soft over the whole picture. Its a good composition but overall the picture seems to lack "punch".
Thanks....Mark

moi je trouve que d'avoir abusé du filtre antibruit, ça donne un rendu intéressant à ta photo,
j'aime bien le cadrage et les couleurs, bref j'adhère beaucoup plus que mark
bon courage, je sais que tu en as
jc

Bonjour Cocky :-)
A fine composition But as Mark pointed out something went wrong with the PP work. Also the horizon isn't level, for me personally the soft focus is fine, but a bit more contrast can improve the image. No worry you are here to learn, aren't you? So made a WS to show what I mean. Hope you will continue to post more picture. Merci mon amie :-)
Amitee
Hans

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