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suburban lights


suburban lights
Photo Information
Copyright: dalia fior (dalia) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 218 W: 0 N: 37] (608)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-12
Categories: Daily Life, Nocturnal
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-12-08 10:11
Viewed: 502
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Driving through the parisian suburbs, at night, you may discover places like that : a very strange and strong light which interets me so much, a tiny shop surrounded by a tree, cars passing by.
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To gnangarra: Thanks Gideon...dalia 2 12-08 11:11
To delnaja: Thanks Fred...dalia 1 12-08 11:02
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Like in an horror film ;D
Very moody
Well done
Fred

Hi Dalia

An interesting composition which holds facination yet doesn't quite sit right with me. There something that is detracting from a good picture. I tried covering(cropping) parts of the image and the angles intensify, may its just me. Sorry cant be more descriptive of whats holding me back.

Then again maybe thats also making it good.

Sorry about the ramblings

Well DOne
Gideon

Hi Dalia !
I love the mood created by the lights of the restaurant and the car passing by ...
It's a nice night shot !
Maybe I would get rid of the right part with this useless building but it would unbalance the composition.
Anyway, I like it :))
Sylvie

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