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Johanna


Johanna
Photo Information
Copyright: Anaele CHEROUX (anaelchan) (111)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-08-11
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/3.2, 1/160 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-10-15 9:17
Viewed: 375
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
A other foto with my little sister ^^
She is so cute... i love her ^^
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Hi Anaele, I thought the photo needed a bit of work to really make your little sis 'shine.' The focus is soft on her face yet her arm and clothing are sharp so maybe a slightly different focus point would have worked better. She's very photogenic and will yield some nice pictures, I believe. Lips and eyes should be sharp as tacks, perhaps a Mona Lisa smile at least. TFS

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1397 W: 0 N: 1693] (13689)
  • [2008-10-18 10:13]

Indeed shes very cute An.could be a fraction more sharp and then its perfect!
jan

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