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Copyright: Elli Maanpaa (ellimille) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 12 W: 0 N: 2] (168)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-05-25
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/3.2, 1/1000 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-07-20 6:01
Viewed: 464
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is a portrait of my sister. She is looking out from the window of the Trianon in Versailles.
For me this is a picture of her. Looking from the dark of her mind to the light of life.

P.S. It was difficult to choose the third picture. In future IŽll but something in color as well.

>B&W, cropped, contrast
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hi emily,
very nice composition with B&W..
successful portrait..
beautiful contrast..
well done!
TFS stay well..
yeşer..

Very nicely done, Elli, and there is nothing wrong with presenting only B&W pictures if that is what you like to do. I like the composition her with your sister so focus on looking outside and she does have a wonderment expression on her face - maybe have her tongue sticking out a tiny bit...not certain. Well done!

I like this portrait and lighting. Good composition. Not sure about the grains.
Try to post it with 800 pixels next time.

TFS

Andre

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  • NINIX Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 297 W: 128 N: 510] (6612)
  • [2006-07-25 12:07]

Hi Elli,
You made a very strong portret here in black & White. It is as if you look out of the window yourself.

Maybe you should turn the picture so that the window ifs vertical.

Thanks,

Hendrik

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