<< Previous Next >>

Centre Commercial


Centre Commercial
Photo Information
Copyright: daisy daisy (daisydaisy) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 607 W: 94 N: 432] (9146)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-09
Categories: Architecture, Artwork
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC TZ3
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-09-24 3:36
Viewed: 121
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
un samedi de courses .....
Vive les grandes surfaces

HAHA

Bonne journée


PP work : Photoshop of course
Add Critique [Critiquing Guidelines] 
Only registered TrekLens members may write critiques.
Discussions
None
You must be logged in to start a discussion.

Critiques [Translate]

  • Great 
  • psyce Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 170 W: 11 N: 96] (1613)
  • [2009-09-24 3:40]

someday I wont be surprised if I see your name in one of the giant posters... you really compose very well and I love your treatment on the shadows... Well done.. TFS

Daisy
Une image très patriotique aujourd'hui o) Cadrage original et couleurs à la Daisy. Pour les zones noires, j'ai un doute. Voulais-tu cacher quelque chose? Sinon, pas sûr qu'elles apportent quelque chose.
Amicalement
JJ

  • Great 
  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1295 W: 0 N: 2562] (20677)
  • [2009-09-25 1:46]

Hello Daisy,

Avec un rien tu nous fait un chef d'oeuvre, quel contraste l'enseigne rouge qui se reflète en noir, tu est une vraie magicienne, grandiose.

merci et amitié

Nicou

  • Great 
  • skot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 75 W: 10 N: 73] (413)
  • [2009-09-25 22:53]

Hey Daisy,

Wonderful timing on this shot. You grabbed the shadowplay at just the right moment when it provided its best impact.

I love the red letters against the bright blue sky. They are shockingly sharp.

I really don't like the big black boxes on the bottom and top-left of the frame. It looks like you were trying to hide something and ran out of time to do anything with it, so you just painted it black.

Other than that, though, this is a great image.

skot

  • Great 
  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1027 W: 81 N: 66] (12366)
  • [2009-09-28 18:37]

dear Daisy,
vivid clear colors are nice,
and this feeling of space is very interesting for my eyes.
"between" is the essence of it, and this inter space between this red sign and its gray shadow on wavy white fence makes fantastic imaginative space.
thank you for your artistic shot,
Akihisa

hI, Daisy. Nice composition and original work with reflections. The black contrasts with the saturated red. I lke the overall look. Cheers and TFS.

Calibration Check
















0123456789ABCDEF