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2008-11-16 - Maud


2008-11-16 - Maud
Photo Information
Copyright: Mick Mick (Mick_M) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 16 W: 9 N: 11] (89)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-11-16
Categories: Portrait
Camera: nikon d40, Nikon 18-55 afs dx F3.5-5.6
Exposure: f/22, 1/100 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-11-29 8:28
Viewed: 293
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
For this shoot :
1 barebulb flash with white umbrella on the left and
1 barebulb flash with white umbrella on the right in
front of the first, a little behind the model who was
nearly between the barebulbs.
I was at 45° on the right of the model.
Just to have a shadow in the middle of the model face
and neck.
Thanks again to the model : Maud

Regards
Mick
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  • maecy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 155 W: 0 N: 247] (1576)
  • [2008-11-29 9:55]

nice shot! a very nice portrait!...i like the monotone...

Cheers!

Rebonjour Mick,
J'aime la façon dont tu as joué avec la lumière et l'ombre, cette dernière tombant juste là où il faut sur le visage pour créer une ambiance énigmatique. Très bonne composition décentrée également.
Ce qui, par contre, me dérange, c'est le fait que sa robe noire se fond dans l'arrière-plan, créant un effet de "découpe" façon "buste". Une sculpture plutôt qu'un modèle vivant, en quelque sorte. Ou suis-je choqué un rien trop vite? ;o)
Merci du partage & amicalement,
Erik

I like your model

This is a very unusually taken shot; short lighting with deep shadows hiding her face, the top of her head is cropped.

But for all of the "broken rules" of this shot, I like it. It's unusual and eyecatching.

Rew

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  • x-ray Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 36 W: 41 N: 26] (288)
  • [2008-12-17 15:36]

Hi
Unusual shot! I like the bold crop unsure about the harshness of the light, have seen this type done with a single light with light bounced back into the face via a reflector.Nice shot though mono suits this style of shot
Kenny

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