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Ceci n'est pas un film


Ceci n'est pas un film
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Copyright: daisy daisy (daisydaisy) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 607 W: 94 N: 433] (9152)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-10
Categories: Food
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC TZ3
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Morserezh/Gastronomy [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-11-05 6:28
Viewed: 148
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
... c'est un navet....
eT VICE VERSA

f3
pp work :cs3
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  • roges Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 524 W: 0 N: 986] (4920)
  • [2009-11-05 6:46]

Bonjour Daisy,

Une excellente image que nous présentons. Idée intéressante que l'exposition de la photo d'un sujet.
Une bonne journée,
Adrian

Hi Daisy
It's COOL! You are very creative.
The sharpness, colours, detail are so great
Best regards
HienVy

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  • CMJC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 70 W: 61 N: 80] (717)
  • [2009-11-05 8:21]

je ne sais pas si les anglophones apprécieront... mais pour moi qui adore le navarin d'agneau (ou le pot au feu aussi ) bien plus que les salles obscures tu m'offre là une succulente photo ☺
tu es donc déjà en cuisine?...

Hi Daisy

As always the idea here is creative but there are little details that I think could be better.

The selected edge of the beet (is it?) is still quite harsh, I know it would be softer if you used 'feather' of 2-3 pixels after selecting it in PP. There is also quite a lot of light bleeding around the lower curve of the beet.

Most obvious to me though is a cut edge at the bottom of the pic, just above your frame - a gap between frame and subject?

I think it is worth spending a little more time practicing CS3!

Just my thoughts friend, keep shooting and keep sharing!

Rew

Eccomi qua,
spero non mi fai cancellare il mio commento..
Rew ha ragione devi lavorare di più sulla qualità dell'immagine e personalmente credo che la luce vada più controllata.
Non ti arrabbiare questa è la mia onesta parere

Anda

Daisy
Ton titre m'a fait rire, donc déjà un sourire vert rien que pour ça. Toujours aussi imaginative!
Amicalement
JJ

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