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grandfather
Photo Information
Copyright: Danielle Dupre (ddupre2) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 242 W: 49 N: 106] (3030)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-11-22
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-10-19 9:01
Viewed: 85
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
2000 meters for the elevation, near volcano, grandfather Émile is playing cards with his friends, le sun is setting down, and it is drawing his kindness on his face,

clik ! he looks at me et gives me his
better smile, happiness !

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Danielle,

Great portrait. We can see the persons personality through the lines of his face.

Well done,

Salut,

Wellington

Hi Danielle!

A very nice protrait. The lighing is awesome, and the POV is perfect.

TFS
Dennis

Hello Danielle,

Exquisite portrait. The lines and the light combine so well. This works especially well because of the lack of colour. Very well presented photograph.

Regards,
Siddhartha

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 395 W: 1 N: 472] (2515)
  • [2009-10-19 12:19]

Hi Danielle,
He looks a very contented man by this image. Great PoV and nice crop, the B&W contrasts are good as is the focus on his smile. TFS
Bri

Danielle
Un cadrage originale et un bon choix du noir et blanc pour mettre en valeur les traits de ton modèle. peut-être serais-je allé un peu plus loin dans le recadrage, en coupant une grande partie du front dont le flou attire inutilement l'œil....enfin pour moi!
Amitiés
JJ

Dans un premier temps, j'aurais dit comme Jean Jacques. Mais après coup je pense que ce flou de premier plan s'allie bien avec l'ombre qui le précède et participe à l'originalité de la photo : il attire l'œil mais le guide ensuite vers la partie nette de l'image. C'est un peu comme un voile qu'on soulèverait...
J'aime beaucoup.

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