Bonifacio

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Bonifacio
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Copyright: ooo boo (ooo) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 0 N: 1] (151)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-07-02
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon EOS 350D, Canon EFS 18-55mm
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-07-23 12:57
Viewed: 763
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The sea is so turquoise thanks to the white sand. This is a natural reserve near Bonifacio. This is an other photo taken on a boat.
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Really strong colours. Like it.

Hello !
Is this one of the Lavezzi islands near Bonifacio between Corsica and Sardegna ?
The composition in three levels is very successful and the colours are great.
The beauty of Corsica (where I am from ;)) is well shown.
Congrats.
Sylvie

You have certainly captured some beautiful colors - I love the intense turquoise of the water against the brown and rust of the rocks, with the green in the background. Compositionally, I think it could be improved. Placing the line between the water and the rocks in the middle of the photo isn't advisable in this case - it creates a tension and doesn't allow the eye to move easily from one area of the photo to another. I see some steps leading down to the water on the left side. If possible, perhaps a stronger composition would be to shift the camera to the left slightly to include more of the steps, and up a bit so that the line between rocks and water is about a third of the way up from the bottom. The viewer's eye could then start at the upper left and wind down the steps toward the water and move effortlessly to the blue sea.

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