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The World


The World
Photo Information
Copyright: Hans Spruijt (GreenBaron) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3142 W: 917 N: 11337] (48260)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-03-22
Categories: Daily Life, Architecture, Mood
Camera: Sony Cybershot DSC W55, SanDisk Ultra-II 1Gb
Exposure: f/7.4, 1/125 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-04-05 9:40
Viewed: 709
Points: 50
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The World
Just a snap shot in Toulouse, here on a small market place in the town center a small bookstore which sells the largest France newspaper Le Monde = The World

Just an daily life impression. Tell me your opinion and how to improve.

PP work:
Perspective crop, a slight adjustment of saturation, resized and sharpened. Add frame and text.

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Hmmmmm ..... I don't know a thing to improve in this one ! :-(
Great colors, frame and a very nice building/architecture.
Good job done.
greetings,
Joop!

WOW! Excellent.
The World and only one person :-).
Excellent capture
Piet

un photo superbe des mains d'un maître Janos

hi hans, nice scene with a good tight crop making a nice composititon, the colors are wonderful here also, the man walking really adds to the scene-gives it life, tfs,
scott

Toulouse is known as the pink city (la ville rose in french) and your photo is an excellent example of this.
The bulding give a beautiful structure in the image.
You may also appoint your image "the two world", isn't? :-)


Well done, A really good stuff... :-)

Nice shot.

Hello Hans! Wonderful scene. Nice windows. Original POV and geometry. Good light and colors. Very good capture. Well done!

Hi Hans,
nice shot. Good combination of frame and object. Great atmosphere. Well done. tfs. stev

How to improve?? I have no idea, this is marvelous! Love how the frame matches perfectly. Wonderful saturation...maybe do in BW? I have no idea! This is perfect!
B-)
Linda

Very subtle colors for the frame, great taste in choosing them! Very well taken, with the off-centered character!
TFS!
Best regards,
Diana

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2692 W: 404 N: 2937] (32375)
  • [2008-04-06 1:48]

Merhaba myfriend Dear HANS......
Wonderful colors and Composition...
Good sharpness and details .
It's beautiful.
Selamlar

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1792 W: 128 N: 3006] (16617)
  • [2008-04-06 2:37]

Gorgeous shot Hans,

I like your unique framing which base on the building and the colours of it, I like the composition, great sharpness and good details, nothing to be improve about, :D

Have a good day,

Cheers,
Sweety

ciao Hans..
compo is good here.. but what i prefer more are these colours blue!! i dont know why but they are really effective.. they create a strange amazing effect with the other colours more light!! "Le Monde" is international.. isnt it?.. the world as title of this shot.. is a really original idea!! i suppose, maybe named with a quiet humorism! ;)) thanks
ciao Marco
;) soon
;) soon

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3270 W: 270 N: 7711] (32868)
  • [2008-04-06 4:00]

Le Monde - very quaint looking building there Hans - so ordered and structured - not like the real world!!
Well composed image - nice and sharp too,
Janice

Hello Hans. This is just so pleasing to see. The architecture is neat and geometrical with good sharpness and contrast of the street scene. The man walking created life in the view. Regards. Jusni

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1379 W: 31 N: 2999] (12062)
  • [2008-04-06 6:02]

Lovely and colorful shot provenance de la belle France with its colorful awnings and wrougth iron guard rails.
Don't change a thing the frame is the right color and fits it to a T, and naturally you had the right font. Humph...... perfection at its best.
Dot

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2015 W: 144 N: 3390] (13589)
  • [2008-04-06 7:01]

hi Hans

Very neat and clean shot of this facade. Great symmetry and color tone. The man in blue and canopy color blends well here. Good moment's capture of this man strolling along.

Great work.

TFS, bill
later

Just a snapshot? Dat weet ik zo nog niet, Hans. Dagelijks leven, OK, maar je overstijgt die dimensie door de - niet van enige humor gespeende - verwijzing naar Le Monde. Of hoe die voorbijsloffende man zonder het misschien zelf te beseffen een radertje is in de wereldgeschiedenis. Knappe gelaagdheid dus in deze foto.
Alleen over het wel zeer grote en lichtkleurige frame ben ik niet écht enthousiast. Had donkerder en kleiner gekund (maar ik stel me de laatste dagen dan ook existentiële vragen over "frames and borders" ;o)).
TFS & groeten!
Erik

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  • ceslou Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 386 W: 15 N: 369] (4234)
  • [2008-04-06 10:54]

perfect capture of a typical old southern france town. this is a beautiful image, simple yet describes a lot about the place. very artsy !

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  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1302 W: 43 N: 2872] (16519)
  • [2008-04-06 13:40]

Hello Hans:)
Great urban capture with only one person - just like by some scenario - great post:)
Tom

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2205 W: 171 N: 0] (28320)
  • [2008-04-07 0:40]

Hi Hans ;)))
excellent photo, colors and frame...TFS
Best,
J ;)

Nothing to improve, but I like it and I've played a bit.
See WS


thanks,
v

Beautiful composition and nice colours as well. Great idea for a shot too.
Best wishes,
Achim

Hi Hans,
Excelent composition, i like it very much!
Well done!
Txs,

Armel.

Superb work from the 'little' camera Hans. A very good architectural shot, fine detail and lovely colour. Perspectives well handled and the sole pedestrian dds some human interest. TFS,
David

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  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1119 W: 62 N: 167] (27859)
  • [2008-04-14 4:29]

What a nice, very nice observation! I must mention the particular sharpeness of your shot, details of everything are just charming. What to write about your presentation ? Perfection !

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