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Retain control
Photo Information
Copyright: Tobias Moehring (tobi11379) (24)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-10-02
Categories: Action
Camera: Minolta Z1
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/1000 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-01-30 3:04
Viewed: 639
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
My brother doing some Whitewater kayaking. He is surfing on a wave on the Durance river south of Briancon.
I did some focus softening and masked the head of my brother in order to have it sharp again.
Also I did some color fresh-up and lid up the rocks in the background.
Last step was to add the frame and title of the picture.
Look at the workshop for the original picture.

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  • OWO Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 169 W: 68 N: 327] (2335)
  • [2008-01-30 3:07]

Hi Tobias,

First welcome to TL!
Excellent first posting. Great sense of the roughness of this sport. Use of light is good and the sharp face perfect. Framing is excellent! Great job.

Regards,

Edwin

Hi Tobias,
Great efect panning. Very well done
Greetings
Raimundo

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1471 W: 23 N: 0] (11740)
  • [2008-01-30 3:13]

Welcome to TL
Beautiful shot with nice action...
Beautiful work...
Greetings from Montenegro...

Hello Tobias

A very warm welcome to TL and what an excellent first posting. Superb sharpness you have caught the action and movement perfectly. Good colour and light and well positioned within the frame.

TFS regards Helen

Hello Tobias.
Welcome to TL.
Great sport shot. Excellent focus and sharpness. Very dynamic effect and good colours.
TFS
Wojciech

very nice effect
reall good
ciao
Lucio

Salut Tobias,
Très très jolie photo d'action.
J'adore l'effet produit par l'eau.
En fixant la photo, on a l'impression que la photo bouge.
Superbe.
Stephane.

Tobias,

What a first shot to show on Treklens! A warm welcome to you! This is a terrific action shot of your brother. I like both of the shots for their own reasons.

Looking forward to seeing more photos!

tfs., Lisa

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2847 W: 263 N: 5947] (23588)
  • [2008-01-31 0:32]

Welcome to Trek Lens, Tobias
This is a fantastic action shot with which to start your adventure on TrekLens. The composition is superb and the feeling of barely maintained control is very evident. The post processing for colour saturation is very effective here without being overdone. I hope to see lots more postings from you....

A few tips to make it easier and more fun:
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- Each time you post a picture, take the time to visit at least 10 pictures in the Gallery to write a critique of the works of other photographers. Observing (and critiquing) the successes and errors of other members make for great opportunities to learn!
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I am sure that these ideas will help you make the most of your stay on the site!!

TFS (Thank-you For Sharing)

Silke

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3557 W: 737 N: 2396] (19036)
  • [2008-01-31 1:11]

Welcome to TL !

Great first photo here.


thanks,
v
ps.I'll be back with points

a very good work,
welcome to TL!

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