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Photo Information
Copyright: Natalia Cinnamon Girl (Elfik) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 81 W: 9 N: 39] (2428)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-14
Categories: Nature
Camera: PENTAX K110D
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): 3rd list of my favorites [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-07-15 14:59
Viewed: 401
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
(a stranger)
"...paakhi paakhi pardesi Distant bird...
tuu to nahii.n hai lekin terii muskaraahaT hai You're not here, but your smile is.
chehara kahii.n nahii.n hai par terii aahaTe.n hai Your face is nowhere to be found, but the sound of your footsteps are.
tuu hai kahaa.n kahaa.n hai Where are you, where?
tera nishaan kahaa.n hai Where is there a sign of you,
mera jahaa.n kahaa.n hai where is my world?
mai.n adhura tu adhuri jii rahii hai I'm incomplete, and you're only half-alive. "
/from the film DIL SE/

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Natalia:
Great image and colors!!
María José

  • Great 
  • Ber Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 298 W: 67 N: 67] (4660)
  • [2008-07-16 8:58]
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och dyby tylko ona szla w druga strone... piekny nastroj, wspaniale swiatlo
pozdrawiam

excellent one
Karl

Impresionante simetría entre la imagen y las palabras. Es una fotografía extrañísima, una obra que pinta de una manera mágica un estado espiritual tanto del sujeto representado -la mujer rubia en este caso- como el de la observadora -tu misma... Ella se va, pero la mitad que tu pierdes se la lleva ella, y la mitad que pierde te la quedas tu. Ella se va... pero deja su rastro de florecillas lilas en el muro, en tí. Me inspiras a escribir, gracias!!!

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