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La force du regard


La force du regard
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Copyright: Urs Achermann (urs0114) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 385 W: 61 N: 567] (4105)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-03-07
Categories: Mood, Portrait
Camera: Nikon D700, NIKON 80-400mm f/4.5-5.6 ED-AF-VR, SanDisk Extr. 12 G.
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/500 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-05-07 2:54
Viewed: 259
Points: 35
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
La force du regard.
Deuxième images du carnaval Vénitien d’Annecy des 180 portraits que j’ai faites ce jour.
Comme la foule est très compacte lors de ces défilés il est très difficile de faire des images sur pied alors je me suis rabattu sur des portraits et des gros plans.

Bon détail prise sur ce monument qui est parfaitement adapté au N&B accompagné d’un tout aussi bon descriptif.

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Hello Urs,

The details and the sharp focus are as good and interesting as your previous shot, however, I feel the use of space here doesn't work so well. There appears to be a lot of space which is not contributing to the shot.
I have done a simple w/s to show you what I mean. I hope you will find it useful.

Have a good day,
Bev :-)

Bonjour Urs
What an interesting capture and costume
Great colors and details
Thanks
Burak

Hello Urs,
Amazing eyes, the mask contributes to the aura and mystique of this stylishly costumed character. Bev's WS is I think good. Best regards...Danilo

Urs
Une très belle photo aux belles couleurs qui a encore plus d'impact avec le recadrage proposé par Bev.Belle qualité d'image!
Amicalement
JJ

Bonjour Urs,

très jolies couleurs, tout bon cadrage et bonne lumière. Bien vu!

Excellente après midi,

Stasa

Bonjour!
En effet superbe exemple d'un beau regard!
Joli portrait plein de couleurs et de lumiere!
Bravo! Carine

Salut Urs,
I like this one much more than your previous carneval post. The blurred BG is contrasting the mask and dress and also has its colour pendant in the feathers - and: the main element of your compo fills most of the frame which is also delicatelly choosen. Very well done. Big smile.
Thomas

Ciao Urs, splendid mask, fine details and excellent sharpness, very well done, ciao Silvio

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1199 W: 0 N: 2349] (19434)
  • [2009-05-07 6:15]

Hello,

quel image encore des ces masque de venitien, superbe, on voit bien le regard, netteté, belle couleur, un superbe portrait, j'aime beaucoup le fond, il est mangigique.

Alors bon séjour en valais et amitié

Nicou

salut urs

magnifique portrait de ce masque venitien
celui ou celle qui le porte a vraiment des yeux de velours dans un masque d'or
magnifique on en veut plus

Helo Urs
Very very good sharp shot and excellent maksk present
TFS
Salut,Braca

Hello Urs,
well captured mask portrait, clarity and nice BG
TFS,
Selahattin E

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  • Doudou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 425 W: 2 N: 893] (5825)
  • [2009-05-08 11:23]

Bonsoir Urs,

La photo parle d'elle-même, elle est vivante comme cette foule autour de toi, ton personnage ressort magnifiquement de ce flou noir et gris qui lui donne plus de prestance!!!
Amitiés
Odile

Hi Urs.

You made an extraordinary portrait with great timing! Expression of the model is superb. Really moody photo!

Have a nice day!
David

Hi Urs,
Very nicely photo vith excellent colours and details.TFS.
Regards,

hAyAti

hello Urs
how are you?
i like the composition and the left space towards the right of the subject, i'll call it looking room yes we can crop a little headroom but still the shot is fine for me.
good colours, sharpness and light
fine post

regaqrds
MAnuj MEhta

Hello!
Very well captured mask portrait, a fine colours and clarity.
Greetings
Tadeusz

A very delicate but strong eye contact.
The background is really well diffused, colours are most approproate and the perspective is really good.
Framing is perfct, TFS,

Regards,

Thomas

So beautiful
grate colors and focus
her eyes are amazing
nice portrait well framed and presented
Greetings,

Oana

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