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~ Brick Wall of Albi ~
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Copyright: LuDivine Laurent (LuDivine) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 307 W: 40 N: 347] (3088)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-07
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Canon PowerShot A630
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Friday Theme 2008/05/09 "Brick/Stone Wall" [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-05-08 1:53
Viewed: 372
Points: 38
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Here is my contribution to Helen's theme.

This is also my 1st attempt at changing the sky, and to be honest am not completely satisfy with it. If you have any advise or suggestions that would be nice. I think its too obvious!

Here is a bit of history about this amazing cathedral:

Albi Cathedral (French: Cathédrale Sainte-Cécile d'Albi) is the most important religious edifice in Albi, southern France. It is the seat of the Archbishop of Albi (in full, Albi-Castres-Lavaur).


History
It was constructed from 1282 to 1480, built in the wake of the Albigensian heresy of the Cathars and the brutal crusade brought against it. This crusade, lead by Simon de Montfort, involved the burning of 400 Cathares—as well as numerous cases of rape, pillage, and execution. The sentiment of the crusade is reflected in papal legate Arnaud Amaury's order: "Kill them all; God will know his own". In the aftermath of the bloodshed, the cathedral's presence was intended to bear testimony to the Christian faith, and its fortress-like exterior likely reflects this.

Features
It is built in the Southern Gothic Style. Notable architectural features include the bell-tower (added in 1492), which stands 78 meters tall, and the doorway by Dominique de Florence (added circa 1392).


From Wikipedia.

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The POV is excellent.
Great use of perspective lines.. and brilliant textures.
Best regards, Daniel

Hello Laurent
A superb Capture of This Stone Castle.
Excellent POV gives a superb perspective.
The sky takes the image to anaother level altogether.
Great Job

Hi LuDevine,

No worries about the sky from me. I think it works really well.

Love your unusual POV here, really startling image. Lots of interest, detail, contrasts throughout the shot.

Great contribution to the theme,

TFS,

John

Hi...
Again beautiful shot...
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Best regards
Andro

hello Ludivine
good perspective
i love this tilt up shot
wonderful colours
amazing sky
good details of this old wall.
perfect for the theme.

regards
manuj mehta

Hi LuDivine,
An excellent POV - well displayed and really sharp details in this. You did a nice job with the sky. TFS Julie

I think you've done a great job with the sky here LuDivine! It looks spectacular and it looks believable.

The subject chosen here and the POV are both stunning, too! Great shot!

Rew

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2046 W: 135 N: 3062] (16543)
  • [2008-05-08 3:40]
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WOW.. that's awesome, I love your pov here, what a huge castle! Excellent textures and details, nice work my dear, great "backdrops" too! :D

Have a nice day,

Cheers,
Sweety

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3152 W: 213 N: 6650] (26276)
  • [2008-05-08 3:56]

Very impressive - majestic too.
I'm not sure about the coloured sky - but I think the building itself doesn't need anything else - it's quite grand on its own.
TFS
Janice

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  • yanm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 531 W: 40 N: 631] (6412)
  • [2008-05-08 4:02]
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the replacement of the sky is good imo Lu, just maybe you can brush it with burn brush that set to highlight. Also before you flatten you can make it more natural if you remove white matte, or you can reduce the white bright of the building (usually by it's contrast) with defringe, just set to 3-5 pixel. Btw I like the pov you have here :)

Yan

Hi LuDivine, Really nice composition and imposing pov of this cathedral. nice lighting as well

Hello LuDivine,

Your pov makes the most stunning shot of this building! It captures the height, the magnificence, the brick details, the contours and the ornamentation!
Then, when the eyes reach the top, there is this surreal sky!

I like it very much! Well done!

kind regards,
Bev :-)

Hello Ludevine

A superb shot of the building here, wonderful POV with good detail and texture. I think the sky works depending on your interpretation. It looks here as though the top of the tower is on fire with dark smoke and orange flame reflections. So if that was tour intention then its fine. If not then maybe just simple blue sky with whispy clouds would have been fine

Lovely post my friend

TFS regards Helen

sujet super intéressant pour une contre plongée :)
amicalement
jo

Good details and colors. The use of perspective and light works very well here.
Congratus. and TFS
Mario

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  • Derona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 163 W: 106 N: 384] (2142)
  • [2008-05-08 23:37]

Hi LuDivine

Excellent POV.
Very dramatic image.
Good addition to the theme.

Regards Derek

Nice POV and detailed textures. I'm not sure about the unnatural sky though. I keep thinking about movies as 'Conan The Barbarian' :-) But I have to admit, it gives the scene a dramatic feeling. The lighting on those two protuding things (do not know the English word for it) is completely different from what you would expect from the sky above, which is probably why it feels forced to me. But overall a great experience. I've learned something again, so therefore 'thanks'!

Joris

Bonsoir Ludivine
Une bonne contre-plongée qui laisse apparaitre un ciel somptueux.
Bonne soirée.
Cordialement
Gildas

Well done LuDivine,
The sky compliments the colour of the building. The blue looks a little out of place, if the whole sky was afire, the whole composition would come together perfectly.
Many a fine image falls short because of the sky that was there at the time.
I don't have a problem 'enhancing' a shot, we all like to present our work in the best possible light.
Cheers,
Pete.

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