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• golden_eagle (492)
• [2008-05-28 16:22]
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Hi Gamal,
interesting abstract composition... I'd say that you could improve this by decentralizing and framing - perhaps, move the fruits to the right lower corner and apply a white border/canvas as framing. Try ithat if you like and let me know what you think.
Regards,
Daniel

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• timtim (7189)
• [2008-05-28 16:53]
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not a bad job, nice lighting poss bit bright in spots, although they are just floating in the middle of nowhere, need to be on somthing and not so central

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• rminkow (5927)
• [2008-05-28 21:14]
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Hi Gamal...beautifully composed shot..great colors and details.

Roger

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• Somu (180)
• [2008-05-28 22:42]
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Interesting photo. But there are few things you could change to improve this:

1. More even lighting: A simple paper to reflect light on the other side would make a lot of difference
2. Fresher fruits might have looked better.. a may be a slight spray of water.
3. Position the fruits slighly to a side, instead of dead centre.

Hope this helps.

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• miau (2990)
• [2008-05-30 4:44]

Bonjour Gamal,
J'aime beaucoup ces fruits lumineux sur le fond noir et opaque.
Une simple et très belle composition!
Compliments!

Michel.