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Copyright: Marylou Lorenzini (Marylou) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 976 W: 67 N: 2717] (13254)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-07-29
Categories: Architecture, Artwork, Experimental, Abstract, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: Canon EOS 400D
Exposure: f/14.0, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-08-12 13:53
Viewed: 244
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
Dome in the city of Lesparre (in Gironde). It was magnificent under the blue sky and the sun.
You will find the original in WS.

Because I learn about Photoshop CS3 and it's so difficult. This work has certainly nothing exceptional, but for me it represents the beginning after many manipulations !
I am satisfied enough by the result. I wanted to create a little bit mysterious but positive sky at the same time, as if it delivered a message of hope, answers to the multiple questions that the world settles(or arises ... please help for good translation !)

Your comments of any types are welcome, so that I progress ! Thanks.
Good evening !
Marylou ;)

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5710 W: 197 N: 2478] (9767)
  • [2009-08-12 14:35]

Ciao Maryline


Visual beauty of this roof
a beautiful dome of the tower
and a beautiful constellation of excellent sky!
I love the colors, details and good taste here!
Lovely composition, a real nice picture.
Congratulations, my friend ..

Sergio

Bonjour Marylou,

Bien arrivés à Sainte-Foy d'Aigrefeuille prés de Toulouse!!!!

Et ben, tu y es allée fort sur CS3, la photo est métamorphosée, tant et si bien que l'on se croirait la nuit, remarques, je suis sur un ordinateur où les couleurs sont saturées à fond alors côté couleurs, je suis plus que servie!!!
Joli travail donc sur ces toits de Gironde, le ciel a pris un tout autre aspect, tu l'as rendu plus que mystérieux, côté philosophie sur les questions du monde, on peut s'y mettre, il y en a plus d'une qui restera certainement énigmatique voire même sans réponse, si c'est de cette ambiance là que tu veux nous parler à travers cette photo, tu y réussis merveilleusement avec ce cliché!!!
Amitiés et gros bisous
Odile

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  • sela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 479 W: 1 N: 472] (3756)
  • [2009-08-14 7:09]

Hi Maryline, this is spectaculare! Wonderful image, beautifully composed.Congratulation my friend.
Regards Rose

hi.
Suprep Art work.
I love the colors, details and good taste here!
Lovely composition, a real nice picture.
Congratulations,
regards,
khawar

j'aime beaucoup l'effet brillant sur le toit
sympa la texture sur le fond, beau travail bien propre (pas de défaut visible, CS3 est fort pratique pour les sélections)
jc

Coucou Marylou

Bienvenue au club de celles et ceux qui s'initient à Photoshop CS3... lol.
Je rame également ... mais quel plaisir , ce logiciel est un truc de ouf mais quand on saura le maitriser ...
Alors là.... LOL ☺

Belle création , il y a une atmosphère mystique.
Jolie présentation et cadrage soigné.
L'ensemble est reussi pour moi.
Mes encouragements.. continues Marylou.
à bientôt
Amicalement

Hi Maryline,

well i certainly like this one than that of the original. this gives more to think about. fantasy and everything else.
keep up the good work!

i a n

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1024 W: 81 N: 66] (12348)
  • [2009-08-20 20:55]

dear Maryline,
the sky is not vanity but full of imaginations like this your picture,
and lots of imaginations are flying and shining freely and artistically,
it is hot, above the cool dome and roof,
the most powerful one in the center of illusionary space is, maybe passion.
it is flame, in the deep core of the mind.
thank you for your excellent art work,
Akihisa

Ciao Marylou, bella cupola e sei stata bravissima come al solito in post produzione, hai creato un cielo fantastico, sei sempre grande, buon week end, Baci Silvio

Hi, Maryline.
It is a strange picture, but the result is fascinating.
Well, to be early with PSP...
Ciao
Renzo

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