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INSOMNiA


INSOMNiA
Photo Information
Copyright: Thomas MULLER (fox-) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 73 W: 8 N: 6] (537)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-05-02
Categories: Daily Life, Decisive Moment, Experimental, Macro, Abstract, Nocturnal
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 2500
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-05-05 5:13
Viewed: 630
Points: 15
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I still can't sleep...
There's a storm , thundering outdoor...
I still can't sleep...

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  • Gand Gold Star Critiquer [C: 355 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-05-05 5:30]

Honestly, on the first view I dont like this picutre, but this simply compo with blured numbers and subject, tell a full story.
Red on the black background hurt my eyes, escpecially with blur gives very tired mood.
This shot is perfect explenation for subject.
Well done Thomas.

Sounds like you could do with a nice hot glass of milk Thomas. Nice early morning shot of your clock. I like the way you only got the numbers and not the clock itself.

what's the use of sleeping pill?

Bonjour Thomas.
Simple mais efficace.

True Insomnia is not a funny issue if you do indeed suffer from it, is it? I have had it now for a year with no help from all the experts in sleep disorders. I like you composition because I relate to it. The mind becomes a run away train that can not be halted....yet it seems to be the time of greatest creativity....Your post is simple yet extrememly effect to those of us who KNOW!!! TFS......:O)

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  • bult Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 229 W: 24 N: 86] (1037)
  • [2005-05-05 11:22]

Okay, here's my truth about your picture:

I like it, but I'm jealous at the same time ;)

Not really jealous, but I did some of this stuff too, and couldn't find a good title / theme to go with it.

Well done!

Nice this image really gets you thinking. Love the analogue digits on the clock and its off centre composition. Simple but effective.

Excellent! So simple but together with proper title tells perfect story! Whole story told just by one word and a couple of numbers. Genious!

Excellent job this one!

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