Western spaghetti

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• rychousmama (228)
• [2007-05-20 19:48]

Wonderful abstract! I really like the amount of detail and the clarity in the shot, which makes every strand of dry spaghetti pop out. Excellent natural colors and good tonalities, the (natural?) lighting here gives the shot a warmth and makes it dynamic with nice soft contrasts. Excellent balance and composition with the criss-crossing bunches of spaghetti and the bunch of mint leaves at the upper left to create contrast and to balance and give life to the shot. There are little parts that are overexposed at the left ends of the spaghetti strands, perhaps selecting those brighter parts on the original shot and then isolating them so that you can adjust levels on the rest of the spaghetti would help. Good decision to leave in the dark corner at the right edge for balance. Excellent point of view from above looking straight down to create the abstract too. TFS!
-Lara

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• taba (2041)
• [2007-05-20 20:39]
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Salut Corinne...
Your photo makes me hungry :)
fantastic composition, as the colours, the arrangement the sharpness etc...
goes to my favorites..
Taba

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• rintile (13394)
• [2007-05-20 20:49]

Hola Corine, gran idea para tu foto, buen color y nitidez. Saludos

PD. Luego comiste a los modelos?

Saludos

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• ls_photography (7506)
• [2007-05-20 20:55]

Really nice lighting and contrast. Great details and POV also.
TFS
Leanne

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• JYB (3738)
• [2007-05-20 20:58]

Bonsoir Corinne,
Beau jeux de lignes. Exposition et contraste excellent. Le vegétal s'harmonise très bien avec le reste de l'image. Très belle illustration. JYB

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• nainnain (3499)
• [2007-05-21 4:44]

coucou mon coquelicot
mais alors moi je comptais voir la carotte!!!!!
jolie ta photo et la petite touche de vert relève bien
inutile de te dire , bon travail(tu le sais)
bisous+++
didith

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• Helkoryo (22130)
• [2007-05-21 7:41]

Well my friend I can see you have been very busy in the kitchen. Another superb capture here and interesting notes once again.

TFS regards Helen

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• SylFondacci (14127)
• [2007-05-21 14:47]

Salut Corinne,
C'est très bien vu et très bien fait, vraiment bravo !!!
Quant au titre, on ne pouvait trouver mieux :)
Sylvie

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• Marylou (13286)
• [2007-05-21 17:32]
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Bonsoir Corinne :o)
Cosa dire ? Molte grazie !!! per quest'omaggio alle mie origini! molto piacevolmente lavorato e così piacevolmente annotato. Bravo !
Ah ! i spaghetti (Barilla soprattutto ;o), tutto uno sogno quando li gustano chiudendo gli occhi.
Bellissima foto.
Ciao bella ragazza ;o)
Baci
Marylou

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• tjutjut (15952)
• [2007-05-21 19:59]

Hi Corinne,

I like the way you compose the dry spaghetti, crossing with perfect light angle, make stunning image of combination shadows from the diagonal perspective.

Lovely!

Tfs,
Tjutjut

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• Pops71 (2093)
• [2007-05-21 20:01]

Bonjour Corinne,
J'aime de jeu de lignes en diagonales et horizontales. Le spaghetti a une belle couleur et les feuilles vertes apportent une touche de fraîcheur.Très belle réussite. Félicitations
Amitiés
Pierre

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• microearte (0)
• [2007-05-22 7:17]

Corinne,

Like all your jobs, this is great also!
Parabéns.
Abração.
Sergio

:) je reviens demain

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• Beger (19918)
• [2007-05-22 20:16]

Bonsoir Corinne,
J'aime beaucoup cette série qui révèle tes talents d'observatrice et de designer! Bravo pour la compostion et pour la grande simplicité d'excécution. Avec les couleurs chaudes, ce clin d'oeil aux westerns spaghetti est parfait! Très bien fait! Annie

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• JohnTulip (35290)
• [2007-05-23 6:21]

Beaucoup 'Sergio Leone' ici (Musique : once upon a time in the west)
Tres bonne acte de presence..Just a little remark: Spaghetti left below corner precise in the corner/angle (Lead-in liner) Grande Bravo
John

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• jonathanhart (15795)
• [2007-05-23 7:32]

super cette composition de spaghettis ! bel effet graphique et le jeu d'ombres et lumières est plus que réussit, très bien fait !
amicalement
jo

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• Tamtidelam (2676)
• [2007-05-23 12:20]

Pâte au pesto peut-être?...miam!
Très belle variété de couleur et une mise en place parfaite!
Encore bravo Corinne!
Salut,
Dany

P.S. mignon ton lien en WS ! ;-)

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• jean11-3 (4757)
• [2007-05-31 9:39]

An interesting view of an everyday food Corinne.
I like the pattern you have created, the green mint leaves complete the shot for me.There is a good range of colour even though we would expect the spaghetti to look all the same. Well done.
Best wishes Jean.

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• marietom (286)
• [2007-06-05 17:31]

Très sympa, cette idée de compo en diagonale.
Marie

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• mjdundee (3300)
• [2007-07-03 3:53]

Salut Corinne,
Spaghetti in fact is my favourite food. It can be combined with so many pesto variations an always gives you a good feeling. The second big advantage is that it does not need big preparations and gives you power but not fat. Never thought of taking a Spaghetti picture but what you deliver here is excellent and looks yummi. TFS Thomas

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• Bianca (1257)
• [2007-07-30 3:45]

Hi Corinne,

This is such an artistic and interesting, well composed idea! So strong through it's simplicity! I like it very much! Well done, greetings from Bianca.

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• tguiz (293)
• [2007-12-15 3:04]

salut corinne!!
belle photo de composition!
la menthe mais un petit detail mais je trouve qui est indispensable pour cette composition!
trés bonne idées et de plus original!!!
photographikement!!

thomas