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To be careful Tooth-decay


To be careful Tooth-decay
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Copyright: corinne Cocky (coquelicot79) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 565 W: 218 N: 1915] (8126)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-04
Categories: Daily Life, Food, Humorous, Experimental, Macro, Abstract
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC-FZ7
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-06-09 10:43
Viewed: 467
Points: 38
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
Sugar is a foodstuff of vegetable origin, made up essentially of saccharose, and various natural substances belonging to the class of glucids responsible for one of four fundamental gustatory savours (sugared).

The saccharose is present in all the plants containing of chlorophyl. Sugar is produced industrially starting from the sugar-cane and of sugar beets.

Other plants contain a large quantity of sugar extracted in the form of syrup :
- the sugar maple,
- the date palm (palm sugar with the sap, sweetens date with the fruit),
- palm trees with sugar (like the coconut of Chile),
- sorghum,
- the Agave americana.
for two last name, no alcoholic beverages ^_°


In April, one afternoon rainy, an idea, and here is the result.
I emptied a part of limps of sugar which is useful only for the guests and our son. The parents of my husband and itself are diabetics then we don't sugar food more.


Photography is black and white. I have several photographs with various plans of shot. The light is that of the day. The pieces of sugar are posed on a black Bristol-board sheet.
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Very interesting,very original shot.Lighting is perfect.

bonjour Corinne,
sur la photo il y a approximativement l'équivalent d'une bouteille de coca ;)
du sucre, encore du sucre, la disposition est bien géométrique, ça aurait été pas mal de donner l'impression que ce champ de sucre aille jusqu'à l'infini en coupant un peu en haut ou en rajoutant une rangée...
au milieu, un morceau de sucre qui se rebelle qui casse la structure et donne de l'intérêt à ta composition et noir et sucre...
amicalement
jo

Hi Corinne.
Very interesting idea and very well executed. Perfect composition and light.
TFS
Wojciech

thats a really nice one!

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  • tibig Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 657 W: 26 N: 681] (7565)
  • [2007-06-09 13:47]

Beautiful conceptual photo. The idea of standing out! The BW treatment suits this picture well.
Regards,
Tibi

Bonsoir Corinne :o)
Rigolo, j'ai pensé à ce genre de photos cet après-midi en remplissant mon sucrier ;o) C'est très graphique, et le N&B est excellent, of course ! Beau damier avec une case récalcitrante ;o) Bravo !
Bisous
Marylou

Creative photo! I'd like without the inner white frame; it looks like a limitation which stops the flow.

Hi Corinne,
Great visual message. I had a different message from simply recognising the impace of sugar. The rows of sugar to me represented teeth and the one upright lump depicts the only tooth remaining that is still intact.
Best wishes,
Celina

Good morning Corinne

"naughty but nice"

I like this composition , nice in black and white and interesting notes. Amazing what we can still find to photograph on a rainy day.

TFS regards Helen

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  • Pops71 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 263 W: 28 N: 522] (2093)
  • [2007-06-10 19:52]

Bonjour Corinne,
Je profite de quelques minutes de repos pour venir te visiter. Les journées pluvieuse t'apporte une excellente source d'imagination. Très belle composition avec un morceau qui s'est rebellé. Magnifique réussite dans un beau cadre.
Amitiés
Pierre

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  • pathy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 417 W: 38 N: 70] (1734)
  • [2007-06-12 1:50]

ce nest pas le sucre qui est responsable des caries mais l'absence de brossage de dents ...!
Belle dispo des morceaux et jolie mise en vleur sur ce fond noir. encore une fois une tres jolie composition bien réalisée . virginie

Bonsoir Corinne
Et bien quel boulot pour mettre les morceaux de sucre. BOn choix le N$B pour cet ensemble
Excellent travail

amicalement

jojo
PS Merci pour ta visite

Just sugar cubes? Great result! Big like that i was sure it was some little blocs of foam for fragile things.

IIt's very graphic! But do i learn it to you? lol!
The next step you can reproduce a wall of bricks :)

hello! this is fantastic idea a shot! great POV and composition! TFS
greetings Aga:)

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  • Mas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 53 W: 62 N: 250] (2677)
  • [2007-06-21 8:52]

I like the idea.
Your black & white choice is good.
I wouldn't have put the standing lump in the middle, but that's just my humble opinion.

tfs
Mas

very interesting composition corinne :)
i like the patterns from the cubes

Salut Corinne,
nice play with simple structures in BW. Good use of DOF and lines. It looks like a monument in modern art. Well done. TFS Thomas

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  • Lyxie Silver Star Critiquer [C: 19 W: 0 N: 6] (8)
  • [2007-09-19 4:52]

Bjr Corinne,
Je suis nouvelle sur TL. Je trouve cette photo particulièrement réussie dans la compo et le choix du N/B, trés trés beau travail! Merci de l'avoir partagé,
Lyxie

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  • navy (63)
  • [2008-01-18 10:56]

Hi there,

I like that,
Even though the photo is BW sugar can give to our live some color :)
Of course decay may be the unliked result.
Well done.

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