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Bubbles
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Copyright: corinne Cocky (coquelicot79) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 565 W: 218 N: 1915] (8126)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-03
Categories: Daily Life, Food, Experimental, Macro
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC-FZ7
Exposure: f/3.2, 1/15 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Citrussy goodness [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-03-18 16:25
Viewed: 464
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 32
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
In the series of my experiments around my green lemon sorry a lime, I made my first endeavour take in photography bubbles made with fizzy water and two slices of this famous lemon.
This first version, more luminous and more "white" in my opinion compared to that that I would put, here, tomorrow, I obtained it while photographing above glass and with a lamp whose light was reverberated by a paper sheet two-sided metalized rigid that one finds in the stores of creative art and who has the same principle as the sunshades (excuse-me I'm not sure of my translation" of studio for a less expensive price and to which one can give a form different since it's rigid but malleable like food aluminium paper in more resistant. A face gilded for a warm reflection and the other silver plated for a reflection with the cold colour.

I seek to improve me then I'm with the listening of your councils and opinion, I say to you thank you by advance for those.

Iso 200

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  • Jong Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 428 W: 0 N: 273] (3168)
  • [2008-03-18 18:12]

you have capture the lemon in very refreshing way, i love those bubbles. very well done with your experiments, Corinne

Bonjour Corinne
Intéressantes études que ce thème autour d'un citron vert.Les couleurs sont jolies et le bulles très nettes.La tranche supérieuse me semble un peu hors foyer. Est-elle en surface du liquide? Aucun point de repère ne permet de voir ce détail. Peut-être une plus petite ouverture te donnerait une profondeur de champ plus grande.
Amuse-toi bien.Je suis ta progression avec intérêt.
Serge

Hi Corinne:
An excellent attempt...
am sure you are posting some more of this and I like experimenting this type of imegry...
I would crop a bit more on the top & perhaps increase the F stop to get a bit more of over all sharpness. If we want to dead stop the floating bubbles, then increase the shutter speed...
just some suggessions...but a very good post!!!
David

oh nice macro =]

well exposed and makes the picture really alive =]
great pic =]
marina

Bonjour Amie
A fine experiment, nice view and result
Compliment for your PP and framing
Amicalement
John

Bonjour corinne

tres bon details et belles couleurs pour cette photo rafraichissante qui donne soif.

Merci de partager

Olivier

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1454 W: 275 N: 2045] (12514)
  • [2008-03-19 4:49]

Hello Corinne.
Very original, good idea and well presented detalis.
Looks very effective.
My compliments.
Janek Kloss

Hello Corinne,
Summer fresh colors.
Beautiful light and details. TFS
Vandana
later

Bonjour Corinne
Il ne manque plus qu'une limonade par dessus pour penser à l'été ! J'aime beaucoup la partie gauche de la rondelle du dessous.
Bonne journée.
Antoine.

Hi Corinne,
Beautiful macro,good idea,nice color.
Best regards,
Ralf

Bonjour Corinne
Une prise de vue originale avec de très jolis détails et de belles couleurs! Pour une première c'est une belle réussite, j'aimerai peut être voir un cadrage un peu moins serré?
Bravo à toi
Eric

Hello Corinne!
Another wonderful composition and lovely effect!
Excellent colours and nice light!
Best regards!
Lili
;)

My dear friend,

Another excellent composition with a very beautiful photograph and a wonderful frame!
Congratulations! TFS

Sergio
on friday

Hola corinne.Tambien me ha encamtado esta fotografia tanto o mas que la otra de estos limones,un gran macro,un gran trabajo.lo dicho gracias a gente como tu estoy aprendiendo mucho.Saludos.Javi Saavedra

Bonjour Corinne, c'est ma preferee des deux image de tes limes dans l'eau petillante. Celle-ci est beaucoup plus nette.
Et comme le mentionne David, une profondeur de champ plus grande rendrait les 2 limes tres nettes.
C'est un tres bon travail et les couleurs sont tres belles. Bravo, Yan :)

Coucou Corinne :o)

Him ! Appétissante et rafraichissante photo ! C'est du beau travail ; les couleurs et les bulles sont superbes, félicitations ! J'adore ... dans mes favorites ;o)
Bisous
Marylou

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