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• atarisphoto (960)
• [2006-05-04 9:14]

welcome to TL...great photo and idea...i am a big fan of walking along the tracks near my house to find photo inspiration...looking forward to seeing more from the two traveling teddy bears...where will they be next...peace***

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• ben-u-ron (4051)
• [2006-05-04 12:50]

Great idea! Well done!

Keep cliking!
Carla

Welcome!

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• Lionel (3737)
• [2006-05-04 13:14]

Bonsoir.
Très bonne composition...
Très bonne idée ...

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• surfacing (0)
• [2006-05-05 18:22]
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Hi Yukiko,
looking at it I feel like in the land of fairy tales. You've got great idea, but I must say I see here some distractions disturbing me in concentration on the bears :-) I made the workshop showing how it should look in my visions. Let me know what do you think please :-) tfs

Marek

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• btokaz (5744)
• [2006-05-06 6:56]

Hi Yukiko. Great idea! But I agree with surfacing...
Tomasz

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• Sans1 (0)
• [2006-05-06 7:35]

Hi Yukiko- Welcome to TL! WHat a creative idea for your posts! This is a good composition- I like the lines leading our eye throught the photograph and the two bears trying to get home- very nice composition! I look forward to seeing more of your post here on TL!

Best wishes,
Steve

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• ose (5420)
• [2006-05-07 17:34]

Hi Yukiko
Nice composition. Good idea and good POV.
Well done

osse

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• Janice (33094)
• [2006-05-09 4:55]

So the dear little teddies are walking around the world!! Good composition Yukiko. I like your point of view (POV) from down on the tracks with them. Thank you,
Janice

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• niner (2068)
• [2006-05-09 15:59]

Hi Y,
great idea, good PP (maybe a bit over saturated). Bird is cool detail, only remark is tilt of few deg.

tfs
D

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• josephcapellan (379)
• [2006-05-10 15:11]
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Dear Yukiko,
You have great potential as a photographer since you're not afraid to create.. the two teddy bears did the trick on this photo. I would like to let you know that my two mentors in Manila were two Japanese photojournalists - Tsugufumi Matsumoto and Itsuo Inoye - two of the best AP photographers in Asia.
A suggestion on your photo: You can take the photo from a top angle to show the bear and the railway tracks for a stronger composition
Regards,
Joseph

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• aido (196)
• [2006-05-20 9:41]

Hi Yukiko,
I followed your link from Treklens and arrived here :-) I love these photos with the two bears, a great idea. Nice idea to put them on the railtracks, excellent!
Regards,
Adrian

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• orbiter (3125)
• [2006-05-22 12:01]

Hi Yukiko,

A very nice idea you had here and it works really well with the title, The scale difference between the bears and the rails tracks really do make for a long journey. Marek's tighter crop works very well as it does away with the distractions in the shot.

Still a good shot and very creative too. Well done!

John

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• napdsp (622)
• [2006-08-18 18:58]

Wonderful creative shot. The subject, the meaning, the composition, the location are all well thought. I love it. TFS.

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• c-ynthia (1765)
• [2008-02-19 7:25]

Great idea and lovely exposed
TFS
Cynthia