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• MLINES (8484)
• [2006-07-21 7:27]

Hi Laila, Good portrait, i'm just learning also. My thought is that it could be improved slightly by having more space in front than behind her? Lighting is very effective. Well shown, Murray.

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• amelie (428)
• [2006-07-21 7:29]

Very nice portrait Laila..look mysterious..
Light on yourskin and hairs is attractive..

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• jkneze2 (136)
• [2006-07-21 7:46]

interesting shadows....mysterious...good

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• hay_kes (56868)
• [2006-07-21 8:16]

Very beautiful portrait.Wonderful contrast and compo.

My Favorite
TFS
hAyAti

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• lollie (62)
• [2006-07-21 8:35]

Exellente portrait Laila, Lovely light & shadows.
Bravo.

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• copadonat (4408)
• [2006-07-21 10:26]

Que buena toma

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• reveur59 (1260)
• [2006-07-21 10:49]

Hi Laila, OK you want a critique here'sone: SUPERB! great light, great composition, great definition and... great model! :)
A very beautiful photography you did a very talented and delicate portrait!
Patrick

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• maratony (1445)
• [2006-07-21 13:17]

Very beautiful portrait Laila. Light is perfect.
Thanks for sharing.
Tony

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• ruudblok (22357)
• [2006-07-21 15:43]

I do like it
strange balance
RuudBlok

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• mortcdz (53)
• [2006-07-21 16:57]

Good portrait shot. Lighting adds a degree of mystery (never a bad thing!) and catchlight in the eye focuses attention where it whould be. I'm not sure that the texture to the right of the screen really adds a great deal to the shot though.
Thaks for sharing
Mark

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• mansua (2113)
• [2006-07-23 17:28]

Muy bella fotografía.
Excelente el manejo de la luz, el blanco y negro, y la modelo.
Felicitaciones.
Saludos.

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• Valy67 (758)
• [2006-07-26 7:14]

Hi Laila !
This is a very good portrait, a bit mysterious but very beautiful ! The light is wonderful, and it was very good idea to use black and white. I would perhaps cut 1cm at the left of the photo, but it's just my opinion, still a great shot. very well done !
Valérie.

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• Hugajda (207)
• [2006-07-26 16:37]

Good work!

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• jacojvr (4032)
• [2006-08-02 14:51]

Stunning self-portrait, really well done very good use of light

jaco

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• Palmvig (701)
• [2006-08-03 4:42]

Amazing that you can get such a good result with an autoportrait! I guess it somewhat depends on the subject then... :o) I would probably have cropped a little off the right as the wall (or whatever) draws some attention from the portrait...

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• Darigaaz (13)
• [2006-09-26 8:55]
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You're are really bright at using the light. That's really impressive how it makes this photo artistict !
I can't believe this is an autoportrait, it is impossible to have such a beautiful light AND such a beautiful look.
If really you're looking for critiques, I would crop the photo to remove some space on the top and on the right. And maybe a bit more space on the left.
But again, waow !

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• mark25 (4605)
• [2006-10-07 22:47]

another one of your 'intelligent' and interesting photos..

truly inspiring!

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• pittdesign (378)
• [2006-11-15 2:02]

Superbe portrait. Très intime au niveau de la source de lumière. La mèche de cheveux a été utilisée du bon côté pour cadrer son visage.

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• Iarnvidsson (436)
• [2006-11-20 13:18]

Hello,
Superb portrait, very deep impressive... A great pic.

Jess

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• salil (2106)
• [2007-01-15 12:24]

Excellent portrait. Mystery, sensuality, balance, suspense, beauty - all mixed in one. I like the original best.
Salil