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Field lines
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Copyright: Laurent KL (tulare) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 49 W: 0 N: 1] (308)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-10-29
Categories: Architecture, Abstract
Camera: Canon EOS 350D, Canon EF 55-200mm f/4.5-5.6 II USM, 52mm UV filter
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-12-06 2:25
Viewed: 502
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
Lines, shadows and shapes from fields and road...
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Hello !

The view is nice but I beleive you could improve the render of this photo.
To enhance the photo, I would darken it a bit. I beleive it is a bit overexposed. Adding contrast and saturation.
I think that this would be a good start. The overall impress is slightly dull because everything is melted in too much brightness.

Also, I beleive the greyish road is disturbing. I think the picture would look better if you could cut the lower part. Hard to say whether the dark low wall and fence should be kept or not. But the road should definitely be removed.

Just my two cents.

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  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1119 W: 62 N: 167] (27895)
  • [2006-12-22 20:46]
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J'aime énormément cet espace, ces couleurs, cette géométrie, oui, une fort belle observation.

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