sctroumph

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• trekks (9964)
• [2007-11-27 0:14]
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Hello Cyril

Welcome to TL community.

Great to have your Interesting photo posted on TL. You are sharing with us how you can photograph subjects, and let us to see more of its interesting features.

The photo appears to be underexposed at 1/400s while sharp, the main subject is not displayed well here. You seem to have placed a poster as BG which does not show clearly. You may think of shooting from the other direction from the source of light. I hope you will post a good photo next.

It is always good for you to have fun this way:
.Post a photo that you think is your best selection, with PP or not
.Write a GOOD NOTE, not just a simple line, to let us appreciate the photo
.After you post, go visit at least 10 sites, comment/critique the shot
.Make use of the ratings and workshops
.It is Useful to read FAQ, Guidelines and ABOUT of TL


TFS, cheers
Bill

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• jentt (2738)
• [2007-12-11 2:18]

Salut Cyril
Je ne sais pas si cette photo est techniquement au point (je ne suis pas un pro non plus!), mais je trouve l'idée excellente et la composition pas mal éxécutée du tout.
Le schtroumph est bien net et l'éclairage rasant le met bien en valeur.
Effectivement le background est peut-être pas à la hauteur. Il aurait peut-être fallut le mettre en scene dans un décor qui rappelle la mer, la plage ou le surf. En tout cas bonne idée.
Amicalement
Antoine