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| Angelique, my little sister. i hoped a nice portrait, but not sure about the dark area in background.. |
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Olivier...
Lovely portrait of a very attractive woman; classic 1/4 profile pose; good POV, with subject looking directly ahead; perfect depth of field and sharp focus. I agree that the dark area in the background detracts from the photo, so I've done a WS to remove it - hope you like it:)
Peter
I like it. and if you don't like the dark b/g, you can do with the ws. or even just crop it.
your sister is really beautiful.
Yan
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(5206) - [2008-05-17 13:44]
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Hi Oliver
You got a lot of WS help on this one. I think the first WS is well done, the second didn't work well on Angelique's hair. Your effort is well done - nice light catch in the eyes - good clarity on the portrait. The first crop is an improvement.
Dan
Bonjour Olivier
Je tombe sur ta photo et avant de te faire la critique, j'ai vu que Yanm était déjà passé par là ainsi que le WS auquel je pensais. Donner plus de profondeur au regard, éviter de centrer le sujet dans la photo. Profite d'avoir une petite soeur aussi mignonne pour mitrailler..lol.
Laurent
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(332) - [2008-06-12 11:44]
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I like the portrait tha way it is, the dark background is a contrating note to the luminosity of the face and the smile of the girl
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