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Copyright: Maryline Lorenzini (Marylou) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1129 W: 65 N: 2625] (12011)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-06-23
Categories: Daily Life, Transportation, Artwork, Event, Friends/Family, Mood
Camera: Canon PowerShot S50
Exposure: f/4.9, 1/60 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-07-22 14:50
Viewed: 369
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 62
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
After old sailing ships, cars ...

As everyone knows, I love cars, racing cars. So I couldn't miss the visit of the ALPINE RENAULT Sport factory which is less than 2 km far from my home :o)

Photo of the assembly 'chaine' of Clio III RS ( Renault Sport). I liked the alignment, the reflections of the light on cars and the white pearly Clio on the right which seems to watch for the good progress of the operations :o)

I added a gaussien vagueness on the background and the traffic lane to the right, framed and put the text.

Thanks for your visit. Don't hesitate to leave a small comment, that's always a pleasure :o)

Ciao,Marylou ;)

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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To perryhooter: Bonsoir Robert :)Marylou 2 07-29 18:09
To ron-franklin: Hi Ron :)Marylou 1 07-26 15:20
To Doudou: Bonsoir Odile :)Marylou 1 07-26 15:19
To CyberMeritam: Hello CM :)Marylou 1 07-26 15:17
To Silvio2006: Ciao Silvio :)Marylou 1 07-26 15:15
Un grand merci :) - Thanks very much :)Marylou 1 07-24 15:41
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Allo Maryline !

Superbe ligne de ces rutillantes voitures. Composition efficace et bien pensé d'avoir adouci les autres éléments.

PS. Coincidence, je prends livraison de ma nouvelle voiture dans...... 30 minutes (^_^). De retour tard ce soir sur TL!
Amitiés,
Robert

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  • Kiwis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1606 W: 0 N: 173] (12337)
  • [2008-07-22 15:04]

Bonsoir Maryline,
Wow! Quel beau travail. On se croirait sur une piste de course avec l'effet que tu as rajouté dans ta photo. S'ils voient ta photo ils vont sûrement vouloir acheter ta photo pour l'utiliser pour leur publicité :) Bravo beau travail.
Bisous
Diane

Bonsoir Marylou

J'adore beaucoup l'ambiance que tu as su capter dans cette photographie. Un bon crop . Très jolie PPwork.

Bien fait et bien réalisé. Merci !

Josée

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 280 W: 62 N: 439] (3564)
  • [2008-07-22 15:11]

Greetings Maryline,WOW to the vibrant colours,also your PP work is well done,I'm not familiar with your software,"Limagerie numerique ACD systems," how do you apply it & what does it do to an image?

TFS

Ron

Hello Maryline!
Very very interestig your composition with great point of view!
Excellent colours and great effect!
Best regards!
Lili

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  • r_maga (43)
  • [2008-07-22 15:32]

Hi Marylou,

Beautiful colours and perspective!
Excellent done! TFS

Greetings from Portugal!
Rui Magalhaes

Salut mon tit bolide,
superbe, une vraie photographie de pub. Chez Renault, il devrait la prendre pour la mettre en illustration d'un article sur la Clio. Oups, je vois que Kiwis à la même idée que moi, les grands esprits se rencontrent lolll. Les couleurs sont terribles, ainsi que les reflets des lumières sur les carrosseries. Et pour l'angle de prise de vue, waouhhhh!
Bisous, mon amie
Corinne

Fantastic use of PP to separate your subject(s) from the surroundings. Good crisp sharp tones and details, good light.
Congratulations
Rew

Hi Maryline

Excellent work with this picture... I find the background blur fine but a bit overdone....the traffic lane blur is not needed as it is gray and has no detail so all it does is detracts from the sharpness of the cars also I might have cloned out the tape across the far car and the grey rectangle halfway up the right hand side.....and the shot is tilted by half deg counter clockwise......hey I feel like Ive been very harsh on an excellent picture I'm sorry but this is one of those shots where you can be critical......again excellent work

regards from Liverpool 08

Ron

excelente idea, me gusta la composicion del lugar, bravo

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  • Danert Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 518 W: 11 N: 780] (3593)
  • [2008-07-22 19:40]

Bonsoir Maryline,
Beau travail de présentation pour ces voitures qu'on ne voit pas en Amérique . Bonne idée de cadrage et de composition . Les couleurs sont bien rendues . Le flou que tu as pris soin d'ajouter en rehausse également la qualité .
Daniel

Maryline,

Great pov you have taken here. Very nice line up of the cars showing perspective in photography. I like the white car arriving on the scene as well as the vivid reflections. Very colorful, bright image.

tres bien faites! Lisa

Very nice Maryline. Beautiful colors and excellent composition. Very effective PP work.

TFS,
David

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1157 W: 15 N: 597] (10372)
  • [2008-07-23 1:04]

Great job!! I love it! Wonderful colors and alignment!! Great detail! TFS and have a happy day!

Bonjour Marylou,

Magnifique cliché automobile très coloré par la présence ce ces jolies voitures, j'ai envie de te dire une chose, cela me fait penser à mes garçons qui petits, s'amuser a me faire des files d'atos dans le couloir de la maison, ils sont d'âges différents mais chacun me l'aura fait!!!
Merci de cette jolie visite dans l'antre de Renault
Bonne journée et toutes mes amitiés
Odile

Hello Maryline,

I thought at first that it was on a ferry!
The quality of the details and the colours is excellent.
The yellow line help lead the eye along the cars and there is a good sense of perspective.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

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  • Maged Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 67 W: 1 N: 82] (791)
  • [2008-07-23 3:39]

Hello Maryline
It's really superb shot , the colors are excellent , your POV is wonderful, outstanding colors and clarity .
Very Well Done
Maged

Now this is a great shot Maryline! LOVE how you did this, with the blur outside the lines, the "half" cars! Really rich colors! Superb pp work!
B-) B-)
Linda

More than Beautiful. Oil colour painting effect.

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2163 W: 381 N: 2154] (23152)
  • [2008-07-23 8:29]

merhaba Maryline...
mükemmel bir konpozisyon, harika renk ve netlik..bravo..selamlar

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  • cinca Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 334 W: 0 N: 68] (3024)
  • [2008-07-23 15:26]

Hi Maryline, really an excellent shot!
Great perspective of cars, perfect management of light and reflections, vivid colours and it's a strong idea the blurred bg! Brava!
ciao, cinzia

Hi MAryline

Nice.......... what can I say, Congrats

Amri HMS

this is a great photo. i had to take a closer look to
check if they are toys are for real. the silver car in the
back right side was the one that threw me off. colors and lighting are great. well compose.
kudoS.
y2koSan

ciao maryline..
it's effective.. and it's different from your usual works.. but at the same time coloured.. that it's your caracteristic!! a wonderful job.. believe me!! thanks
ciao Marco

Hi Maryline,

very clear, with very nice colours. I like it's simplicity. Nice use of repetitions. tfs

Marek

Hi Marylou,

Beautifully done my dear..very nice capture and great pp work done..

Nice touch..:)

CM

Ciao Marylou, bella prospettiva e grande sfilata di Clio, bellissimo lo sfuocato dello sfondo, sei molto brava con la post produzione, elegante presentazione, bravissima
Baci
Silvio

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 865 W: 0 N: 1395] (5654)
  • [2008-07-26 15:55]

Bonjour Maryline
Quel alignement de couleurs pour une belle composition et les resultats sont impeccable et bien reussi.
Dot

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  • hester Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1380 W: 31 N: 1561] (9603)
  • [2008-07-27 10:54]

Hi Maryline

I love the framing here and the sense of perspective, great PP work as well, it all gives a great sense of depth. Perfect exposure as well

TFS

Karan

Bonjour Maryline
Voilà une photo digne d'une pub de Renault. J'aime bien cette petite voiture. Quand je vais en France, j'achète une Clio (j'ai bien dit j'achète dans un programme achat/rachat). C'est une voiture fiable et agréable à conduire.Le flou gaussien est parfait, les couleurs sont bien vives, une composition et un encadrement des plus artistique. I like the way you cropped the image.
Bravo
Serge

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1462 W: 126 N: 2045] (17677)
  • [2008-08-03 15:02]

Bonjuour Maryline, superbe travail avec cette photo. Au début je croyais que c'était des modèles au 1/43! Bonne astuce d'avoir flouté le background! Bravo et merci!

Mario

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