Louvre #01 - Pyramid and Tourists

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Louvre #01 - Pyramid and Tourists
Photo Information
Copyright: Romain Donadio (green) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 194 W: 90 N: 205] (2405)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-03-28
Categories: Daily Life, Architecture, Decisive Moment
Camera: Sony DSC F828 Cybershot, Carl Zeiss T* 28-200, CCD 8M 2/3" RGBE, Hoya UV 58mm pitch 0.75
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/60 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-04-11 7:43
Viewed: 907
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
I just wish I had better framed the picture.
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Very good shot.

  • Great 
  • Judy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 168 W: 94 N: 153] (529)
  • [2004-04-11 9:43]
  • [2]

Great shot Romain. You have done well to capture the reflection of the tourists and the detail of the architecture too. Nice and relaxed. The colours of the clothes is complimentary too. Nice and sharp. Not sure about the framing, but I like what you have done with this. There are great lines and angles.

  • Great 
  • edji Silver Star Critiquer [C: 21 W: 0 N: 0] (56)
  • [2004-04-11 11:29]
  • [2]

Belle photo de ces 2 personnes avec l'architecture spécial en arrière-plan. Dommage qu'on ne peut pas voir complètement la réflexion dans l'eau...

Nice shot! I really like the way you've captured these two in front of the pyramid with their reflections beneath. I particularly like the contrast they make to the predominantly grey background!

I think if it were my shot I'd consider rotating it just a fraction (say 0.27°CCW), and possibly cropping more from the top. I'd also think about using NeatImage, I think there's a little noise in the image - it's not objectionable though! Well seen, and well captured :-D

  • Great 
  • freddd Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 354 W: 55 N: 78] (1905)
  • [2004-04-11 21:32]

Très belle composition à trois plans. Le Louvre derrière amène une dynamique inusitée à l'ensemble avec ses lignes en biais. Scène naturelle et bien vue.

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