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Blue, Magenta, Green
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A simply try to collect some primal colors and test the blur effect of long focal shots...
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Pretty good.
Subject is interesting, even though I'm far from being a flower freak.
Focus is good - could be a touch sharper - did you sharpen before posting?
Composition is almost right - but right enough.
Maybe a light and subtle frame would add?
All in all - interesting and quite competent.
I'm happy if you are.
PROMISED WORKSHOP IS COMPLETE. Very simple ... sharpen and build a frame. Be back.
Hi Laurent, this is what we in Australia call a 'Bottlebrush', correctly known as Callistemon. They have a wide range of colours from bright reds and oranges through to the soft pinks and mauves that you have displayed here. You have executed this to perfection, softness is exactly as one would view this flower in its native habitat. Congratulations and TFS
David
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