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blue and blue
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Copyright: elody faure (naturelo) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 199 W: 35 N: 56] (1347)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-08
Categories: Architecture
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-12-16 14:21
Viewed: 630
Points: 10
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this is in Alsace! the very good region of france because this is a interesting architecture. and I like blue enormously, and this small window charmed me! it's more importante the light on the right, because it break the straight lines I find. in more it is "destabilizing" because it is not right... that amuses me too!
with you to judge some...
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I like windowpictures; hard to take them in lines with the natural cameraframe; you choose a unusual angle here. Your view has impossible horizonlines.
I changed a bit in the workshop; just a flat view with new colours.
I hope you can appreciate that; I learned this technique in here and it is nice to use it!
Thanks Elody
Huub

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  • Alla Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 113 W: 18 N: 63] (763)
  • [2005-12-16 16:04]

Hi Elody.
I like how you composed this picture.
Interesting play with the light on the wall.
IMO, just a little bit too much cropped on the bottom. I think a bit more space will give more volume to the picture.
Well spotted!
Best wishes, Alla.

J'aime bien cette présentation! En fait je n'ai pas le ciel a mon goût sinon je t'aurais déjà envoyé un Worksup ou j'aurais remplacé le mur par un ciel plein de nuages blancs... Le résultat serait hallucinnant! Mais j'ai un ciel bien précis en tête pour ça... Des cumulus sur fond de ciel bleu! Bravo pour le détail bien présenté!

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  • lucbus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2115 W: 92 N: 1856] (10317)
  • [2005-12-17 6:38]

Salut Elody,
Très belle composition pour cette fenêtre, j'aime bien les 2 tons de bleu avec le cadre brun et l'effet de la lumière à droite. Très bien réussi.
Luc

blue, blue and blues... thank you for your beautiful photos like this.

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