Birth of a banana

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• Fons (15594)
• [2005-12-21 12:12]

très bien fait et très clair
Jamais vu de si près

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• LenScapp (35)
• [2005-12-21 12:26]

Hi Laurent. The first thing that caught my eye was the sharpness of some of the flower.An aperture of f5 hasn't given you enough depth of field. Perhaps a portrait angle and smaller aperture would improve.
Barry

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• kbrownvc (637)
• [2005-12-21 14:43]

Laurent, I really like this shot, perhaps a greater depth of field would have been better, such as an F/18 to F/20, to bring in more of the banana, but you have wonderful clarity in this shot. Keep shooting and when you take a shot such as this, try several shots changing your apperture and see what the depth of field difference does for your shot, that is how I learned. Digital is wonderful because you can see the "right now" and all of your shooting data is right there so you can see what you can improve in your shots. For me, it was like the light going on.
Kathleen

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• DimeSH13 (95)
• [2005-12-21 17:09]
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Salut Laurent
Belle photo mais pourquoi avoir choisis d'excentrer la fleur ?
Pourquoi ne pas recadrer directement sur elle en la mettant quasiment au centre ?
TFS

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• iso (27905)
• [2006-03-07 14:48]

Personnellement je n'ai jamais vu, d'où ma curiostté. En plus une belle qualité d'image, un vert si tendre et cette lumière si douce qui nous révèle ici et là de beaux détails. Merci de nous apporter une photographie belle et pour moi instructive.