the lonely one

Critiques [Translate]

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• Peeotr (2307)
• [2005-10-08 12:45]

Please, write a note!

The idea is not very original, but still nice. mostly because of the negative.

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• smoothdude (1330)
• [2005-10-08 12:46]

really cool shot here. I like what you wrote in your profile about improving your work here on TL, but what that also means is that you have to give back yourself.

You should always try to give out more critiques/comments that you receive. I see you have about 9 pages of received and 1 page of given critiques.

So no points awarded to you until you start becoming more active. But this is a great shot.

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• bult (1037)
• [2005-10-08 16:36]

this would've been so much better if you hadn't posted the other one.

But I like the minimalist feel.

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• vlaaitje (0)
• [2007-09-26 13:50]

I am a poet, and this is really gorgeous, it shows a lot to me, wonderful done