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• Aazragi (1522)
• [2005-05-13 22:34]

Simple Lovely shot. Nice lighting and composition. Well done.
Latif

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• DiaAzul (80)
• [2005-05-13 23:47]
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The composition of the flowers is interesting, however, there are too many technical issues with this picture to make it really stand out.
1/The background is not uniformly illuminated and there is a distracting mark on the right behind the flowers. The grey colour does not complement or enhance the flowers in any way. It may have been better to pick a light blue background, and place it further back so that it is out of focus and doesn't reveal the papers texture.
2/The flowers are strongly back lit, however, this means there is no detail in the flowers. They are neither totally silhouted, nor fully illuminated. Leaving it half and half is perhaps not to clear what was intended.
3/ The bottle doesn't add to the composition. Either it should be cropped out or turned into a feature, choosing either a more interesting angle, or better vase to complement the flowers.

I did a workshop just to play with the image which may give you some post processing ideas that you can use with this type of image.

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• yttt (2114)
• [2005-05-14 5:15]

well mixed - tones, colours and facture

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• fox- (537)
• [2006-05-26 9:28]
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Simple mais monstrueusement efficace.
Le seul truc que je trouve à redire... c'est la ligne grise à droite des fleurs qui me dérange un peu , car, elle me détourne du sujet principal.
Sinon, l'éclairage fonctionne vraiment bien.Bravo
FOX-

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• harpya (9777)
• [2006-07-31 9:19]

Wonderful composition,
I adore its light simple, but of great impact.
Congratulations


Sergio